this little ficlet was unepexected, but pretty good. Is there a sequel to this? I would like to read more if possible

Aww I only wanted to read a yaoi between the two and I think if there is more this could become awesome keep it up.

OMG! Please update this is freaking amazing like u have no idea I really want u to update!

OMG! That was the saddest thing I've ever read! My babies! Meeeeeeppppp! Update update update!

Luke made my cry. I hate when he cries. I feel terrible for Percy, he broke my heart. I love them as a couple. I hope the next chapter comes soon!

This story sounded interesting so I clicked it. Judging by this author note I can tell that I could not respect you as an author none of the less a person.

Thank you for shattering my heart, and I wish you the best

Tatiana, weve been through a lot of medephoricle shit before. Ur one of my fav writers on here. i just want to say that we will alwayse be closet buddies! I respect u! Thump thump kiss peace sighn! And for that son of a gorgon douch bag who was being a smart ass dickwad, fuck u u fucker fuck fukedy fuck fuck fuck shit fuck stitty thingshit fucker-

Ataline: dri you can stop now, i think youve defended tatiana enough-

Never! That shitter fucker king of shitty fucking and shit!

Ataline: oh, for the love of olympus!* knocks out with a baseball bat* sorry about that, she is protective of her writers and if that mother fucker wants to dance again we have our pitchforks!

Holy craphola! When did this happen? I'm insanely sorry that you wont be writong anymore bt why not? I really loved his story, dude. It was awesome!

So you delete the stories? Absolutely brilliant.

People really like this story especially me hopefully you'll return

OH EM GE PLEASE UPDATE! This is so AMAZING! it's like unbelievable how much I'm addicted to this story! I keep reading it over and over and OVER again until u update so PLEASE do so! Poor Percy all insicure of himself and Luke's being so oblivious to how Percy feels! Zack is really being an ass though! And I'm so scared for Percy to get his heart broken! I know exactly how Percy is feeling right now! And when in Hades is Luke gonna see there is something wrong in how Percy is feeling! Please please please update your killing me here!

Sons of Dis, Percy needs to stop PANICKING! Maybe you should get Percy pregnant so that he can STOP WORRYING about Luke's feelings for him. AND GET THAT BASTARD SON OF MERCURY TO ACTUALLY SAY HE LOVES PERCY!

Update... soon! :D

I vote for Percy not to get pregnant!
But it's whatever you choose and I don't really care...
But if he was pregnant I think it would make things very interesting! ! !
Oh! and btw... UPDATE SOON! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Pretty plz? xDDDDD