To be honest, there aren't any words that could come close to describing how beautiful and touching this story was. So I'll just say thank you so much for writing this story, not to mention coming up with the idea in the first place~.

That's why Gargoyles is the best.

Great fic. I honestly thought the flowers would have greater significance but I really liked how you made Luffy pull through purely through his own efforts and those of the crew. Stories like these always makes me wonder if the body's limitations can be exceeded by a person's will. And that thought process brings me to my last point.

To be honest, I still have a problem with the whole "women are naturally weaker" concept in swordsmanship, but mostly because not all fighting styles focus solely on arm strength and all forms of fighting rely on both the mind and the body, which is different for everyone. I have always wondered if gender really mattered. I mean being a man might be advantageous in some ways but in others, it's not. Women have naturally stronger leg strength and better flexibility, but guys have naturally stronger upper body strength. Then again, if a person wants, they can overcome their areas of weakness. So isn't ultimately, the will of a person the most decisive factor to his or her success? But I'm not a swordsman and my focus is geared to all martial arts, so who knows?

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good

This is really good and realistic! :'D (remind me of one breath-taking episode on NCIS)

I knew Luffy is so strong... And would back healthy again...! Otherwise, the people who had strong confidence on him would be upset... And i'm sure Luffy himself wouldn't want that...!

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I knew it's mostly about Zoro and Chopper, but i'm glad the one who you made sick was Luffy...! No offense, Luffy...

But the only one who made sense here indeed Luffy...! I can't see it if the sick person who made Zoro talk to Chopper was someone else...! Right..!?

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I'm glad i found it...! :)
I never find the story that close like this, so i dont know what fic that made you write this fic...! Probably find it later...

Anyway... Nice fic!

I wanna read the original of this story. :( But it's good. This is actually the 15th time I read this.

One time when I was with my dad watching this show and one of the characters was immensely concerned about someone's death or something and he - my dad - was going on and on about how stupid the character was for being concerned about that and I could not make my dad understand how from the characters perspective death could come at any moment. (Yeah I know that was a run-on sentence)

Yay for torturing luffy! (not that I would ever do such a thig _). Great stuff, I love seeing the crew out into stressful situations that probably wouldn't happen in the series but gives enough drama to bring out those deeper parts of the characters that makes one piece such an amazing manga. Good job :)

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I loved this! Especially Chopper, I think you made his character very well. Aww, Zoro you sweet little marimo~

Absolutely loved it. It was so deep and really touching. The characters were very believable and I could picture perfectly everything that went on. Simply amazing, and one of the best Zoro and Chopper introspection fics I have ever read. Thanks for a great read :)

Well, I've pretty much already shared my opinion, but hey, I can still review!

I read the whole thing again, and it hit home better when I wasn't looking for mistakes ;) Chopper is simply too sweet, and both he and Zoro share a simple connection. They know that even Luffy is not immortal, but have a heartbreaking hope that refuses to be shattered... *Wipes away a tear*. Once again, lovely job!

Excellent and touching story!

I like how you explained the relationship of friendship between Zoro and Chopper, and the message put: life is fragile.

I think Chopper is the one who always supports loads of battles or injuries more than any other. It's hard to be a doctor in a crew that is always exposed to danger.

The best of your stories is very well portray the personality of all. And that's not so easy.

Keep writing stories so beautiful how are you!