good job

I really loved this! I think it was exactly what I was looking for.

Sooo hot. 3 Loved this. :D

Love it!

Wow. That was just like...incredibly hot.

That. Was so. Bloody. Hot.
God damn.
This is the best sex scene I have read in quite awhile. xD
You actually made it believable that Nathan Drake would enjoy being fucked up the ass.
Characterization was fucking great. I heard every single line of dialogue in their voices automatically, especially Flynn. I wish they would have had another snappy conversation right at the end though; I can imagine that being hilarious.
Asdglhgasd you are a fantastic writer. 3

That's hot 8I And very much in character. It was amazing.

Good story! I love the idea of Harry introducing Nate to gay sex! Their little back and forth quips really do add some spark to the sexual aspect and I can totally see it playing out that way. Then having Nate come so soon the first time was truly both funny and erotic. You did very well!

~That was so GOOOD! I love Nate/Harry! You did a great job

Well, well. I promised a review, here I go:

You made some mistakes in spelling some words, missed some every now and then and in the end you wanted to get over with it, so you did some typos too. But - all of that is minor and more a coincidence.

As far as I can tell, you put much effort into the story and I felt it.

I. Felt. Every. Bit. Of. It.

I've never been the fanfiction reader, because most of them are just stupid or have long passages that are just boring or they won't reflect the thoughts and feelings properly. But your story kind of convinced me that there truly is a good side of fanfictions.

I don't understand why nobody else commented on this, but I do for a reason.

While I read this story, I was grinning all over. I could identify with both characters simultaneously - and this is rare, too. The little conversation they are having through the whole scenario is my personal highlight - the well chosen words to describe their thoughts aside.

I couldn't do any better - of that I'm sure.

Yes, it is true, there are things you could do better. But that would be done with a moment of calmness and someone that reads the story before you post it to correct it.

There is no need to type every second of a foreplay in detail, no need to give too much details about how it felt exactly, what every tiny inch of skin felt like when the other one touched it. This story didn't bore at all. It was a relaxing, amusing and fucking sexy fanfic all over to me.

Very well done. I'm proud of you.

-SuperbiaRook

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