This is so cute! Great job!

That's right. Wendy had a Hell of a time in her childhood. Jane got the sh*ty childhood that I wish no one would have, but, pardon my french but, sh*t happens. And sometimes for a reason. May not be a good one, but its a reason.

I'll spread it loud a clear, 'kay?

Im with you! I love Jane way more then I ever liked Wendy (Not that I don't like Wendy) She has flaws and shes awesome because of them Wendy was too quiet for me and I love Peter/Jane I think they are awesome

Oh my gosh you are so great at this i love this fanfic and the pairing so much that i got very happy thanks you just made my day

Well said message an lovely story.

i loved jane for all her bravery and spunk and preferred her over wendy because she always seemed like the meek, mellow type. i love this one, and i love peter/jane as well. great job :)

You speakin' the truth! I completely agree with you about Jane. It's easy for people to hate her on the surface without really thinking about what she went through in comparison to Wendy. Anyway, super cute story! Peter's the best and Jane decided to stay! Happiness galore. :)

I was watching this and I love Jane the only reason shes like that is because shes been around a war zone shes seen death and more Wendy didn't need to grow up Jane did

Amazing. Loved it! You have a way with words that turns any boring old sentence into pure, heavenly reading bliss. :)

Why do I have the feeling you don't like Wendy :I I do love Jane though. She's not snobby nor a bitch. She has a stronger personality than her mother. (Maybe due to the fact that the first movie was made a really long time ago when character personality didn't matter as much as it does now)
But one tiny thing that bugs me is the fact that it your fanfic started out quite nicely in the beginning but the end felt undeveloped and quick. Or maybe it's because of the many comparisons between Wendy and Jane which could have been said differently or not have been included at all.

I loved the story... And I love this couple...

I agree with you about the Jane haters. She had to grow up to protect her family! And so were she never meet peter she gave up believing in him. Wendy was a little 2 girly for Peter. He needs a girl who once he gets to be carefree is alot like a Lost boy. That is where Jane fits in. She was only bossy because she was use to actin grown and like a mother to Danny.

I love this story and Pairing. .

I agree people are too harsh on Jane when her childhood was almost lost if it wasn't for Peter ;)

So agree with you on Jane! I love Jane and I think she's better with Peter. Loved this and though I think Jane and Peter would one day live on Earth, it was still an amazing and super cute story!