Liked the story line :) nice to see improvement towards the end as well :)
keep it up!

Wonderful story..Clearly your best!

I liked this story. It really showed Arcee's softer side, there aren't many stories where she cries. I liked how Jack and Arcee acted together as boyfriend and girlfriend. Keep up the great work.

...Do you even speak English? because it doesn't look like you do.

i like it! chapter 6 was kinda funny...something tells me that arcee would kill him if he didnt come back in one piece! :)

y hasnt anymone else reviewed this story yet? oh well haters gonna hate. anyway even though it was really short u got a good plot set up...sumthin tells me arcee sint gonna take the news to lightly. your grammer was alot better and so was the spelling..all in all a good update. hope to find out hwere this story goes! love u all kthxbye!

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what can i say? its got potential!arceexjack stories are really poular now and i think you've got grounds for a good one! all i would recomend is checking the grammer adn putting it into paragraph forms. hope u continue to update it loveyouall kthxbye!