Are you ever going to continue it it's been 2 years can you please finish the story

This is an awsome story. maybe you could send me an OC and ill include it in my story

very good

o no! pinkie pie is hurt! lol what about reappearing and disappearing sandwiches? i dunno lol

DUDE Brandon is my name this is so COOL!

... I like that sandwich... even if it did hurt Pinkie

XD He's got the TARDIS! YES! Dr. Who FTW!

This is amazing it seems starswirl or the timelord doctor found police call box lol. Anyway if he says its true then the barrier is already in a weakened state and Pinkie don't bite into the antimatter sandwiches lol. Excellent job on this chapter bravo.

Awesome chapter,
Kinda got me at some points but other then that I loved it.

Keep up the good work

What a peculiar cliffhanger.

Great as always, Legion. I look forward to the rest of what promises to be a fine adventure.

Horrible traps? Why would you need those?
An idea from a totally unrelated story: I started to think that if Starswirl wanted to, he could use his legendary magical ability to create his own home, one that didn't need traps. It would be something like an extra-dimensional space, not completely connected to any world, so he could go wherever he wanted and not be bothered.

good job, now to figure out how and why Starswirl was on earth... XD

OMG! ITS STARSWIRL!

Great to see you're fully back :3

Oh look.

Starswirl the bearded your kidding me right? Now that is major twist excellent job on this chapter ienjoyed it bravo.

It's finally back!