I hope jake comes correct one this next chapter. I don’t wanna see her giving him too much leeway.

Everybody but Sonia and Leah are a tool in this story. (That’s not a critique on the story). I’m SO GLAD she Cussed both Jake and Bella out! I was neutral about Bella’s characters, but either somebody lied to her about what happened or she came to her own conclusions because of her own messy feelings. In any case she was doing too much Calling Sonia’s house like that!
(Still it makes for an interesting story lol). I cannot wait to see how this Leah Sonia friendship works out. And really, jake doesn’t deserve Sonia at ALL.

I’m glad Sonia told him off. The effect of the imprint is really wild though! Wow.

Sheesh what a mess. Jake is actually being a whole jackass. Like imprint or not Sonia didn’t do anything. Also Edward is ALSO messy as hell. Like, he really just used Sonia to stake his claim on Bella. Completely disregarded sonia’s feelings and position. Ugh. I hate that the imprint is making Sonia sad I wish she could hold on to her righteous indignation at the whole mess!

I LOVE Sonia’s personality. I laughed when she called him a Goofy faced dick, and I’m glad she didn’t really cower or submit in the face of his F’d up attitude.

Maaan, that imprint. I wonder how her nan knows.

Wow what an amazing start to the first chapter!

TALK ABOUT ABSOLUTE BULLSHIT! ANOTHER HORRIBLE WRITE! I KNOW SO MANY GIRLS WHO WOULD PISSED AT THEIR PARENT/S IF THEY DID SOMETHING LIKE THAT TO THEM! not being true to the teenage lifestyle you realize this yes?

Aaaaahhhhhhhhh I want more

this story is BY FAR the best twilight ff I've ever read, like seriously, the way you made those characters you (in a positive way) and the story's logic it's so awesome, I'm obsessed, I love that it's not a typical Fanfiction with just a new character in the old storyline but the way you created a new story, and your style of writing, it's so awesome, you could be a professional! love it so much, please continue!

she is pathetic

Omg don’t listen to that dumbass! Ur an awesome writer and their just a hateful bitch with no life. They shouldn’t even bother reading ur fanfic if their gonna have such negative input!

Update please

Would it be Bella's daughter then? Utlapa spirit wife

God no! I’m sobbing so hard, is this all there is? There’s no ending? Omg I’m crying I was so invested in this beautiful story