My favorite definitely when Shinichi threatened to jump if Kaito won't tell him what he want to know.
Also oblivious Shinichi! Lol
Man I didn't expect all that.

I like it! Spent my whole day reading this fantastic story! Thank youu!

Really enjoyed reading this, thank you very much for sharing!

That was such a cute and beautiful story. I love it! I couldn't stop reading (even in classes...) until I was done. I'll put this now on my favorite list, because it's really nicely and awesome written. Well done! :3

Really good!

... When I've reached nearly the half part of this story, I just know that I have to add this one on my favorite FFn list. It's an awesome 15k story ... I love every single part of this story ... The plot, your story-telling, your writing style, how the characters and their relationship grow, how you describe everything with those italic words, how you add some touch of friendship and family, and blend them with romance ... I love how you separate every timeline with those italic words. I also love how you describe KaiShin's growing relationship as if they try to build a strong wall, but end up collapsing. It's really sad. I was crying in some part of the story. I can really feel the feeling of the characters as Kaito and Shinichi's relationship become stronger, but broken in the end. Then, come the puzzle part. When I see how much Kaito was hurting in Kaito's POV, then I see how Shinichi try to find his deep love for Kaito among that feeling of betrayal while being amnesia. I really live the puzzle part, too. Ir shows how much Shinichi has, with everyone love him just like a best friend or a family. Then, finally, he find the final piece to perfect all of them, and it is love, it is Kaito. I never guess that the last piece will be handed to Shinichi like that. It's really sweet ... I can imagine all of them in my mind. Then, he goes with all precious people to him. I don't know how about Gin in the end, but I think your focus is not on that. Yes, the Gin part started everything, but then it is all about how Shinichi afraid that Gin will lose his precious people. In the end, he has them, and he has Kaito, too. The dense Shinichi part is funny. He is really dense, but cute. How he threatened Kid that he would jump is cute. I think, just so Shinichi ...

I really love it, Shimizu-san. I wish I can read more of your story in the future :) Keep writing! Thank you for writing this story!

God that was such a good read, I realy loved this story, it's pacing and kaito! For some reason I loved how kaito is portrayed.

This story is absolutely beautiful. I shed some tears while reading it. I could feel how betrayed Conan felt as I read through, the feelings of how Shinichi felt when his mind was a blank yet he feels heartache. The puzzles are amazing too. I keep on feeling a 'pang' when the puzzle slowly forms into a beautiful picture of the ones Shinichi loves. Wao... The ending was great. I ended up wishing this was a series lol *grins*.

I really love it. This one's a great story as well. I hope that you'll continue writing Shinkai stories. See you soon.

soooo adorable! love it ;)

Kyaa This was so romantic Kyaa I love it

Wow that was really amazing! I love how the reader sees shinichi's progress with the memory puzzle as the story goes on. I love the last scene btwn ran and shinichi. it was cute and bittersweet.

Legally, you don't have to post a disclaimer. It's something people do, but it's not required.

.!.!.! what about Gin? awe c'mon. All that fluffy romance and they're still in danger?

BTW, I defiantly prefer Shinkai. Its hard to do because we're flooded with kaishin round here.

Good job and thank you.

Amazing, Amazing! Looking foward for more of your stories to come