Please continue

Im dumb. so because the dark lord and Harry have a piece of eachothers soul,that makes them both containers and both immortal, correct?

Oho, fantástica! Sério! Adorei ver esse lado negro do Harry dessa forma, realmente, todo mundo peca em ficar pressionando para que ele seja como James. Agora, ele empurrar o Sirius pelo véu? FABULOSO! Não que eu não goste dele, mas ele tem seus momentos irritantes, e nessa fanfic, ele foi retratando BEM IRRITANTE kkk

Wow. love your story!

Oh why did you stopped?! It was great

I neeeeeeddddddddd moooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeee

pretty good. this works as a complete story even though it was propably meant to be longer. the last chapter ended in that can be interpreted as an ending.

plz write a new chapter

I can understang why you are stuck now... I wonder what you have in mind for the future of this story. Between the Order, Voldemort, Harry and Severus... Hermione and Ron, Remus and Sirius... If you want to talk about it, I would be happy to give you a hand if I might.
I'd be happy to see you find the end you wanted to this story :)
Paul

This battle was a pretty hard defeat for Albus. You made a wonderful work on rewriting the canon and Harry's anger. I'm quite impressed.
I might no be fond of Sirius falling through the veil, but maybe it'll help Harry see what he might become arount Tom... I mean, maybe there is a third alternative where he might be happier, if he could just go away from both Voldemort and the Order. I not it's really likely that Voldemort would let him go...

I really like how Severus opens himself to Harry and allows him to know more about what he does but... Now I wonder, why was he so eager to let his contribution being unkown to anyone except Dumbledore ?
I'm sorry if my english is a bit poor, as I'm not a native speaker. If there is something you don't understand, don't hesitate to ask ;)

Hahaha ! "Severus will be your guide, your protector, your everything" I love it, mainly the numerous way we can understand your everything ! Hum... well this is a snarry, even if it is still a work in progress... This chapter made me really want to know more about life at Voldemort's place.

This was an unexpected developpment, I must admit. I mean, I understand why Severus choose to follow Harry and Tom's demand, yet, Tom's reaction to Severus loyalty might be a bit out of characterness, I don't know...

This first chapter is really nicely built to catch our attention. I like it, mostly the way you play with the Order. I like how no one seem to see Harry for who he really is, only what he is.
The fact that Harry seem to accept so easily that Voldemort can talk to him and, basically, do whatever he wants in his mind is a bit odd, maybe, but I can understand why it happens there.
This is a really good story, thank you.

Love it so far and seriously hope u will start updating it again someday soon