Reviews for Fly Free
Cyberbook chapter 2 . 7/3
I for some reason can't stop reading Robin as if she had an posh British accent
12lawmanj chapter 40 . 4/19/2019
So, what happened to posting chapters 41-43, or was it going to be 41-44? I mean it's being 5 years since you last updated so...is this getting finished or what? Because it's an interesting story, without an ending, and not having an ending is just so...unsatisfying, but that's not criticism of you, I just have a problem with closure.
Guest chapter 11 . 4/13/2019
im... okay with this, Robin and kakashi.
Astronut7 chapter 1 . 8/17/2018
You know, I really don't quite see how this story could be improved at this point; it's just that good at doing the job it set out to do.

I'm re-reading it from the beginning, and really the only thing I'm looking at as I read this first chapter is that I would like more; more updates (to complete the story), and perhaps an elaboration on these first few scenes. Maybe a couple more points of view would be nice, along with more descriptive body language with respect to the surroundings.

I mean, you've got the viewpoint of the Hokage, and Naruto here. But Robin herself? What about the medic, who has to deal with another unexpected thing happening that day, on top of the regular unexpected ninja shenanigans? I'd like to see more about what Robin is thinking during this time-particularly through body language, as I imagine that Robin views the world a lot more through touch, and different viewpoints.

You've got a very active story going on, but there seems to be very little descriptions about the environment until it already directly affects what the characters are doing, which does keep me in suspense, because I don't know what's going to happen next, but on the other hand, I keep thinking the characters are surrounded by empty space until they aren't; there's no persistent environment.

However, despite lacking all of the things I would like more of (in this first chapter, as I re-read), this story is amazing, because it does the job it set out to do; I would have never thought to send Robin to another world had I been writing a One Piece Fanfiction. It's a great idea, you've made it work; I learned something, and I'm left wanting more. I think it's just fantastic; absolutely fantastic. Thanks for writing this story; I'll be sure to check on the other stories you've written, as soon as time permits.
RenegadeForLife chapter 2 . 4/12/2018
OK so I get that the other world and magic fruit things would be surprising but are Robin's basic powers really more unusual than the kinds of abilities that ninjas have. I mean it's pretty similar to clone techniques when you think about it.
edjomal chapter 21 . 3/19/2018
... oc's... why? sigh
edjomal chapter 20 . 3/19/2018
why him? he complicates things.
edjomal chapter 19 . 3/19/2018
you even made temari likable and more human-like here (shes the sanest among the sand siblings) amazing
edjomal chapter 16 . 3/19/2018
you know what. I LIKE THIS. just platonic relationship between an adult man and an adult woman. this makes me happier than the usual romance thing.

youre honestly amazing.
edjomal chapter 15 . 3/19/2018
yo, new reader here. just want to say that this story is amazing and you know what? you made haku a boy. boy you're rare. most writers these days write him as a girl- it bothers me (not because of the sex but it ruins the canon uniqueness that haku has, being androgynous looking).

also my main comment: honestly Robin could be and is Kage level. why so? yes she may lack firepower and being a tank (although it was canonically shown that she is one of the most resilient members of the straw hat pirates- being able to recover quickly even from lethal attacks). what she has is speed and cunning. shes not a frontliner but an assassin. and in a fight, anything goes.

i might be too late honestly because this chapter and the future ones were already posted way before i read it but seriously dont follow that anonymous comment about her being too strong- SHE IS STRONG. she was just nerfed to the point of plot in one piece ever since she became one of the protagonist/ good guys. she is honestly like Minato and minato is already kage level even without AOE jutsu like the rasengan.
MadelVer chapter 40 . 2/21/2018
I love this story! but is it continued or not? I was always a big fan of Robin and I love the idea of Robin in the Narutoverse! She being all morbid but helping all the traumatized people in Narutoverse! In fun, weird way!
59marxbb chapter 40 . 1/25/2018
Oh shit! Just read through this today, and wow you've made a really interesting story. Really cool to see Robin take center stage, and it's fun to see the threat levels translate between the two stories. It's interesting to see how the story is arguably going 'worse' than the original, but may be perceived as going better by the characters looking out. A consequence of a lot of coincidences and super optimized match ups in canon? I hope this is as fun for you to write as it was for me to read!
Guest chapter 40 . 12/31/2017
Hope you update soon.
stevesgaming87 chapter 40 . 11/8/2017
So its been 3 years... About time for the new chapter?
hellkiss chapter 40 . 9/29/2017
One of the first crossover one piece naruto
Love it
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