Reviews for A Shocking Betrayal |
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![]() ![]() Amei...deu até vontade de chorar...merecia continuação de onde parou. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you do a sequel to this story please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I knew something fishy was going on. If it was their friends or parents, either would've done something that would give them away. The least likely person is Tommy's mommy. Wanting to protect her son, she sacrificed everything that made Tommy gappy. |
![]() ![]() LINDA HISTÓRIA...MARAVILHOSA! CONTINUA...VC TEM TALENTO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was grea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow what a story good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I didn't see that coming. I have to say, you do an excellent job with these characters. I'm very impressed how you can make Caroline a loving Mother in one story and a complete bitch in another. Your writing style is very diverse and I hope you continue writing. Great job with this story. Ten stars. |
![]() ![]() Love idea of Kim mom betraying her because nobody ever exspat it. |
![]() ![]() Love it, Intruason idea. |
![]() ![]() This is one of the best stories I've ever read! I love it! You should really do a prequel, you know a story of Tommy and Kim at Christmas and when she got pregnant! That would be amazing! |
![]() ![]() Can I just say I loved this story! You should do a continuation of it in Dino Thunder with Kim and the boys! That would be so cool! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really was happily surprised a the appearance of Kim's mom. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved how Tommy was the one able to make Kim fight to survive. I love the idea of the connection between the two of them having that type of power/strength. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the cliffhanger! It makes sense, when I remember that the "Betrayer" was so focused on Tommy's future. |