such a sweet story! Thanks for writing it. :-)

SO BEAUTIFUL!

The sweetest chapter!

Besides the few inconsistencies of propriety like the 3 dances line when having done 2 sets would of been a huge thing 3 would of had them engaged. And a few other minor things, I really enjoyed the story as a whole. Good work.

Uh. Caroline like tittles so... Even Mr Darcy showing interess on Elizabeth could be nothing comparing being friend of Elizabeth?

I have good intension on my review, the plot is interesting and the writing so good! :)

I like the writing - I am not so well in english-, but... 30,000 pounds for each Bennet sister? I could understand 10, 000... I mean, Richard Fitzwilliam was a second son and he was like if he was a little poor. And, 3 dances? 2 was scandalous, isnt?

All was so fast ._.

I thought l had reviewed this story ,but it looks like l hadn't. Reading both versions right after each other was certainly enlightening. The differences and similarities between the two were fascinating to discover and compare. It also shows just how better of Elizabeth is in this version. Still scarred and wary of re-entering Society and a relationship, but not as much as she could have been. Being widowed earlier was a blessing in disguise, as she could do all the things she wanted to help out her sisters' doweries and other things. I adored Lady Catherine's disapproval when Mr. Colins told her who he wanted to marry. Hilarious. I did find it interesting that Maria Lucas was given as Mr. Colins' reluctant bride. I was glad for the unusual pairing when it meant that Charlotte and Colonel Fitzwilliam could fall in love and get married.

I was and yet wasn't surprised at how far Caroline Bingley was willing to go to try and seperate Elizabeth and Darcy. The idea that she would wilingly involve Wickham into plots againts Darcy was a shocking twist. Fortunately Darcy having Colonel Fitzwilliam as a cousin has many benefits.

! Fantastic! I was enraptured, you have crafted this very well, wonderfully transposing the origanal characters into the tale you have weaved, their dispositions and actions felt sufficiently in character for the lives, experiences, and circumstances you gave them both before your narrative began and as it happened. Fantastic, truly brilliant. Thank you for writing this

Well done and thanks so much for writing!

I was hoping for Charlotte and the Colonel!

Poor Maria! At least Charlotte escaped!

This story is brilliant so far!

Lovely story. Thank you

This was lovely! Thanks for sharing!