you Bruce go die yo R

I seriously cannot believe that you can be this amazing at writing!Damian's character was awesome,still our not-so stoic little assassin and his interactions
with his family.I love the akward-sometimes-adorablerelationship he and Bruce have and feel you capture it perfectly in your(as usual)great stories.

Wow... Thats just... wow. Its amazing.

That was cute, adorable, soooo sugary sweeeet. I got watery eyes in some point of the fic awwww the bond between Dami with his big brother and his daddy.

Damian was so awesome. I liked the way you describe his inner feelings towards his brother and dad, and himself. It's just felt like a diary of sort. Annnd ummm I felt like Dami was a little bit childish, so insecure, so emotional, so sensitive OOC baby. But I like it cause he shows FINALLY something human for once, feelings. Yup I can hear Jay and Tim's chuckles, laughing clearly to the soft demon who dying for cuddles. All thanks to our dearly older brother Teehee...

RenesmeVivio~Out

The analogies of Bruce being the Ocean is such... a innocent childlike thing to do that at first I was worried Damian's going to come off as OOC, but oddly enough it fits.

The way you wrote him, serious (and with such a proper vocabulary too) but still with that touch of honest innocence wonder that all children posses is honestly a gift. Give yourself a pat in the back because you freaking earned it.

And that little bit at the end where Bruce admitted that he misses having a little one around is just. Wow. Such an icing in the cake. I have now words to describe how perfect of a way that is to end this story.

So cute

So... So... AWESOME! I NEED more of this in my life! You are so good at writing daddybats between Bruce and Damian and still keep them In character
It's good to know someone else understands that while Dick is awesome and totally amazing, he's not Dami's father - he's just a big bro
That's the way I've always seen it - these moments between Bruce and Dami are rare, but they're priceless

"I missed having a little one to hold." Aww, Bruce is such a softie.

¡Lo ame! fu hermoso *-* casi lloro (no se por que creo que me emocione), fue tan lindo e interesante.

te quedo increíble.

I want to smack Bruce in th face with a cactus.
He's such an idiot when it comes to anyone he cares about, I don't really think he deserves forgiveness.

You did a wonderful job writing this, I'm all emotional now.

loved it yet Dick is in it more than bruce so he should also be one of the characters

I can't even begin to tell you how utterly fantastic that was.
I was reading this as a person just looking for a short story to fill a few minutes and was quickly pulled into this plot line! You manged to keep the tension up so well, and you captured such a beautiful relationship between all three of the characters in such a way that it was a pleasure to read.
Thank you so much! This was one of the best Fanfictions I have ever read.

Ahhh! I loved this so much!
I'm glad you added the bonding between Damian and Bruce at the end!

Words cannot describe how beautiful this story is nor my love for it. I truly explored Damian's feel

That was so cute