WOW. MIND BLOWN. THAT WAS...WOW

I just finished rereading the Lightning Thief after like 2 years... idk why I said that...

I aM nOT crYInG yOu aRe!

So is this another version of The Lightning Theif?

My heart...

The bitter sweet pain! :( This was so incredibly good! I felt liking crying but at the same time I was smiling, your amazing!

hands down...LOVED THIS! awesome story! XD

I love the ending! :D

Awwwwweeesssooooooomme I always liked this pair this story maybe short but its so touching I think I'm crying too much awww !specially the last sentence"I know who the Lighting Thief is..." :-)

This is great ! So full of emotions, the ending isn't crappy at all, I love it. But pardon me, I'm a little slow sometimes... At the end, does Luke comes back to the past and change his choice or is it just what he imagined he could have done to make it different while he is dying and the he dies ?
Can't you please write a sequel so I understand better and maybe so it ends happy? *.*

wow that was good

Awestruck.
The beginning was simply. . .
there are no words to describe. I like it though.
And what on OLYMPUS are you talking about? The ending was BEAUTIFUL.
But my most favorite part of all of this; is that when Luke cuts him off, tell him "Dont say it," I honest-to-goodness thought Percy was about to say "I love you."

"I wish things couldve been different."
You just made me cry harder.

I cried so much.

This is so awesome. So helfway through that was him going through the past again? Making the right decision? I'm a little slow...

Wow I love this! Your and incredible author but I hate the cliff hanger! Please write a sequel or something coz as I mentioned before I LOVE THIS FIC!

Ahhhhh... So cute :) love this fic