Reviews for Taken
KingIchi chapter 22 . 7/12
You writing this as if they are actually Brother and sister which is the most annoying thing cause they aren;t and never were.

And it doesn't take a rocket scientist to tell when here plot i going. Cigarettes are bad, Tanya is bad, why is Edward even with her? He doesn't like her, and she is a bad influence on Bella now.

Oh I know, THERE ISN'T ONE. You just want a reason for Bella to start doing shit Edward would hate
Guest chapter 9 . 10/4/2019
I was thinking that Edward might be ok cause he was waiting until bella was of age to make a move. But he's being super fucking creepy and Bellas not interested at all...this is just wrong.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/4/2019
"the most smartest"? LOL
Guest chapter 2 . 7/5/2018
I thought he was 22
Moody-Rascal chapter 22 . 5/13/2018
Discontinued; time to delete.
Guest chapter 22 . 1/22/2018
I know it's been a while but please update if you can.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2017
Pls update...l love ur story
charbronte chapter 22 . 9/20/2017
I do hope one day you’ll continue this story! i loved it x
emmettismymonkeyman chapter 9 . 11/1/2016
Well.. he is persistent, I'll give him that lol
emmettismymonkeyman chapter 4 . 10/31/2016
Wow.. Edward's a jerk..
emmettismymonkeyman chapter 2 . 10/31/2016
Edward is being kind of a creep but for the sake of the topic of the story, I am accepting his weirdness lol.. can't wait to read on.
emmettismymonkeyman chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Wow... I am liking where this is going.
Kajal chapter 18 . 8/29/2016
I love the story . Pls update
trisherondalemorgenstern chapter 22 . 4/12/2016
Please make bella realize she loves edward too.. cant wait for an update
Guest chapter 22 . 3/27/2016
Oml update pleeease. I really love this story, I hope Bella realizes her real feelings for him soon.
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