The Gang as petty hair brained criminals.. Going to enjoy where this goes!

After you reviewed “One for the Money” so generously (thanks for that by the way, it meant so much to me!) I thought I should return the favor and review one of your tales. Boy am I glad I did! This is an excellent AU fic — it’s always fun to see our beloved characters in new, unfamiliar situation. You can certainly spin a yarn, I loved the suspense and detail you wove into the mystery. It’s been a minute since I read Scooby Doo FanFiction, and I’m glad this was my first foray back into it. Off to read the first part of the sequel now!

Okay, I'm shook - this story is so amazing! The attention to detail and the way you write the gang is impeccable, and I really love how the epilogue is satisfying and has a happy reunion for the gang, but it also leaves things open for future mysteries and for the chance for Devon to strike again. I really, really hope you keep writing, because I would read anything you post. Thanks for this amazing story!

This was such an amazing story. I loved the story. An interesting take on the gang. I really hope you write the epilogue you were talking about soon, but you should be proud about writing such an excellent story. I was so intrigued when reading it. The plot left me on the edge of my seat, the Fred and daphne moments were so cute, and all the friendship moments between the gang like Fred and shaggy and shaggy and Velma. Also love Scooby in the story when he’s mentioned;) I just love this story so much and how shows an incredibly dark tone for Scooby. Can’t wait for the epilogue!

I came to read your story after I saw that you left a very kind review for me on my own Scooby Doo fanfic. Even though I've spent the past few years reading fanfic on this site, somehow, I've never come across your story before, so I was intrigued. I've spent the past few days reading it slowly, and today I read chapters 17-32 in minimal sittings, even though I promised myself I would be working and updating my own fanfic a lot more today. And all I can say is, holy wow, you are an amazing writer. Every chapter was impactful and suspenseful, and I loved the dark twist you have on the gang as kidnappers. I admit that at first I was apprehensive about how the gang would become friends when kidnapping Daphne, but I loved this take and it felt so natural and cohesive. I especially love how you wrote Fred and Daphne, and I loved the take on Shaggy and Velma's relationship, too. I hope you keep writing more stories - you are so immensely talented.

I'm a sucker for Fraphne. Love this story. You should keep writing scooby-doo fics after this story cuz you're an amazing writer.

Absolutely brilliant. Really, really love how you write Fred and Daphne in particular- and Ethan's part was fantastic. Love it- can't wait for more!

PLEASE UPDATE I have fallen in love with this story and need to know how it ends! Looking forward to reading it! :)

Brilliant! I absolutely love this story. The plot is fantastic and I'm so excited to see what the turn out is towards the end. Great writing

Omg! Im so happy you're continuing with this story. I love the plot and so excited to find out what happens. Keep up the good work :)

OK, so this is pretty superb and I have seriously enjoyed it so far. I love the twist you've provided with Daphne's dad, and having the crooks dressing up is also a brilliant idea- really loved that touch. I hope you come back to this story and update at some point because I am going to spend some time wondering whether Fred is OK or not...

Many thanks for publishing this.

Jazzola

I do hope you continue with this story. I'm so excited to find out what happens in the end :3

It's getting exciting now. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please continue with it. It's fantastic

Wow! This story keeps getting better and better. I'm so thankful you're continuing with the story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great writing. It's by far the best FanFic there is

Any chance we'd get more of this story? I'm desperate to find out what happens. This is my favourite story on FanFiction