dick mostly ANTAGONIS OC and kekkai genkai

Too much OUT OF CHARACTER

I really wanted to throw up when I heard that Haruno was the ANBU commander ... This is the greatest humor in the world of fanfiction, the Haruno family becomes the ANBU commander hahaha Orochi alone but can destroy Konoha? I am sure that in the next invasion Konoha will turn to dust, because there is OTOgakure and Sunagakure .. too over power orochi but what an interesting story, despite the flawed humor of the ANBU commander HARUNO

Great story continue as soon as possible please looking forward to the next chapter

Lo de ameyuri no me lo esperaba pero bueno . Fue un perfecto capitulo .

Hermano esta historia es grandiosa . Espero que no pares

Ok, now you got me all excited and will have to wait, haha. Good work. I will wait then for the next chapter!

This was a great idea for a story but I’m afraid I can’t read this any longer, you’re mistakes in grammar and sentence structure make this very annoying to read. I’d suggest getting a beta to go over it and point out mistakes, as well as reading some actual novels and books to get a feel for writing on a higher level.

more chapter please D

very good

Hi. This has been a great story so far. When are you planning to update the story again?

Plzzzz continue I am particularly intrigued by this story and I would love to know what happens next.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Scales*

That penguins of Madagascar reference Also I did the skills related to Samehada?