I just love this to bits!

Hahaha I love this! What a funny idea for a story, and you really captured their voices! Oh and WHERE on the skirt were those stains, hm Sybil? So funny! Write a sequel, with more stains... haha ;)

This is so charming yet passionate. I loved it! You especially captured Edith and Sybil's conversation at the end so well. It was great to read what Edith had actually said and Sybil's interpretation of her words side-by-side. As if dating isn't hard enough in this day and age, I can't even imagine how hard it must've been when every little move (or stain!) was scrutinized! Wonderful job - thank you for writing and sharing!

Ahahaha! Love it! Especially: 'oh no'.

Not the kind of stain I thought it was going to be... ;) Very sweet and well-done.

To echo my other reviewers I also had a silly smile on my face whilst reading this, very very cute and enjoyable thanks.

I was grinning from ear to ear the entire time I was reading this! Please write more! I loved it!

Ohhh lovely little chapter

This made me smile insanely! Loved it. :)

Very cute! I really enjoyed it. That kiss was pretty hot.

I can't believe this doesn't have more reviews! It's a very sweet piece, and I can hear their voices in my head as I read it, it's very in-character. ) Great job!

d'awwww, this was such a sweet little bit of fluff! I loved it!

I LOVE this!