I...she could of just moved into his house?

Prince Bubblegum?

this was absolutely amazing. there was some errors in the names like it's the Land of "Aaa", not "Ooo" and in one of the chapters you called Gumball "Pribce Bubblegum", but other than that, it truly was great! probably one of my favorites.

Oh my glob I loved this story so freakin much! I can't even describe how good it was, it jus makes my heart feel so fuzzy and happy! Keep writing, you have a real talent.

This story was great I had fun reading it :)

You should of really made it more teir fifteen(if you know what i mean ;-)

daaaaaaawwwwwwwww this is cute. :)

That was so cute! ;)

Wow that was brilliantly done. But I have to say that you kinda made Fionna look like a slut. I just don't believe that she would do that, you know make the first move. That's more of a Marshall Lee move. But then again this is your fantansy. So I give it 4 and a half stars! :D

Sob sob sob such a happy ending :-)

Wtf was that I wasn't expecting that to happen

I really loved this story. Marshall and Fionna are my OTP and you wrote them really well. The sex stuff was handled brilliantly. Most of the stuff on Fanfiction like that is totally weird to read and it's like the entire story was written around the sex scenes but you handled it very tastefully and it actually felt necessary to the story. Keep up the good work :D

Oh my glob. You just wrote the best, most beautiful, tear-jerking, amazing story EVER. I'm serious! You did an AWESOME job! Gah I love this story so much ;;. Congrats on writing such an awesome story! Keep up the good work!

It's awesome! OMG, I think it's the best one I have read.

This is one of the best fanfics I've read. I'm surprised how well you handled the risque moments. Enough detail for a thrill, enough subtlety for it not to be gross. They actually felt like intimate moments between characters in love and not just fanfic porn. Well done on that part and on delivering a decent and surprisingly moving story. Bravo.