| Reviews for Jack and Sally's First Time |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2019 First of all. Thank you. But one question. If sally wanted to lose her virginity to jack. Wouldn’t she have already lost it in her life? I don’t know. Just asking but. Cool story |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/14/2019 i feel uncomfortable , jack has a d*ck, and lips .-. |
 NutmasterxD chapter 1 . 1/13/2019 Me gusto mucho! Gracias por escribirlo - |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2017 Ok I lived 4 the fanfic it was awesome but this movie is NOT a Disney film. |
| Concombre-sama chapter 1 . 5/24/2017 Wait, wait.. But Jack doesn't have penis it's a skeleton xDD How he does that ? (I'm french sorry for my poop english) |
| Seren Ivy Turner chapter 1 . 9/4/2016 OMG I LOVE IT SO MUCH! ️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️ THANK YOU SO MUCH! |
| Lizola Lirila chapter 1 . 5/5/2016 OH MY GOD ! That would happen in the movie. I mean sally and jack are perfect together because they have chemistry. Anyway thank you so much i love this story. |
| pikachu chapter 1 . 3/17/2016 omg im so in love with this its amazing nice work |
| Pack49 chapter 1 . 2/28/2016 Haha love it nice job |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2016 That was so helarious |
| Avaion chapter 1 . 10/25/2015 But i love it |
| GothicNerd913 chapter 1 . 12/3/2014 LOVE IT! |
| Summerkiss 15 chapter 1 . 10/19/2014 Okay for one, all I can say is...awesome! It's usually so hard to find a decent Jack and Sally lemon fanfic but you my friend have a good piece here. And it's okay that it's the best. Come on, you said it yourself that this is you first lemon/m-rated fanfic, so of course we're gonna cut you some slack. Keep up the good work ;) |
| AmeliaWolfe chapter 1 . 7/26/2014 I think you have a good start here. I really like that this is short and to the point although when writing your next one, try to give a little bit of a back story to build up to this moment and maybe add some more foreplay. But all in all, really good post. |
| Moongirl123 chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 Incredibly crappy? I thought this was cute |
