Ha! I love this bunny and your writing style!

I really really love the ** at the end. It made me laugh so hard that I think I woke up my whole house.

Love your story. :)

Steamy, steamy! I do think I love your Mercer a little. Great job!

A delight to read even repeatedly, especially repeatedly. You've a real gift for descriptive prose, and your characterization is bloody glorious. Absolutely nailed Mercer, you really got that bastard down to a fine tee.

Never stop writing Metrophor. I would give away various parts of my anatomy without hesitation if it assured I would one day be able to construct prose with such guile.

you make me laugh...continue I've had a bad day.

What an awesome fanfic. I have read this multiple times (along with it's sequel) and each time I'm always impressed. I love your writing style and the way in which you describe the characters. Excellent work!

I must say: This is the probably the most spectacular piece of Skyrim fan-fiction I have read yet... (I really have no hope now, do I? T.T)

I can never tire of great characterization, and I could almost hear Stephen Russell's voice in every word of Mercer's dialogue and it sent delicious chills down my spine! You, madam, have just earned a loyal and avid fan! :)

Please post more Mercer Frey fictions. I'm dying for them...

The story is awesome and I think you have Mercer's personality down perfectly. Love the story.

Your metaphors honestly made me laugh out loud, they were so spot on. particularly the one about her common sense sticking its head in Alduin's mouth. :D

wow i'm not a fan of mercer at all, but this was just wonderfully written! I'm surprised there aren't more reviews. Keep up the good work!

Lol. This was perfect. XD

This was so beautiful and well written I can't even. The way you write is GORGEOUS, the metaphors, the humor, the feelings and Mercer...I've never been filled with so much hate and attraction all at once. You really captured a lot of the mixed feelings I'm sure many of us have about Mercer. *D;;;

This needs a sequel, fosrs. A million times over.

This story is GLORIOUS. You have no idea how long I've waited for a Mercer fic. Not to mention that the language you use: it's so beautiful, so smooth- with great comparisons, metaphors, flow.

Love it, love it, love it.

I remember this as one of the single best fills in the Skyrim Kink Meme. The one that beat this one (narrowly) is, I believe, the sequel. I hope you put it up soon- it took me ages to finally stumble across your gems, and I hope other people will be able to enjoy your work.

Beautiful fic, and I hope you keep writing.