interesting Harry and Hannah is an interesting ship

A nice story with a not-so-common pairing
Thanks

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. Keep up your great works of art.

Thank you and Please,

Terri

I loved!

Ron, Ron, Ron. God knows your jealousy twisted into hatred, but did you have to start hating your own family?

Led! Led, led, led. The past tense of lead is led. Why so many writers get it wrong I don't know but it's really frustrating to read. In the last paragraph of this chapter, "as Voldemort personally LED a small group". And "nearly a dozen aurors", not near. Get a beta, please?

Oh, come on! While your story isn't bad, your spelling is atrocious in places. Harry put on a pair of boxes? Were these corrugated boxes or shoeboxes? Do you not know anyone who could check your spelling and grammar before you post?

whipped and I loved rons death I think he kinda wanted it to end that way or really didn't care one way or the other.

the problem I'm having with the concept here is, what was the actual *point* of the marriage contract?

See, in many fics with said contracts, they include a clause where the family is to raise the other child if their parents are killed, thus actually being useful to insure their kids welfare during dangerous times.

Here, the abbots wanted a contract due to the war, the potters eventually agreed, but not ONE hint that the abbots asked about or even expected they ought to have taken harry in after the potters died.

So how the hell does the contract do anything except rob both kids of their options/free will from age 1?

Umm, I just skipped and read Chapter 14. Sorry but I'm not reading any further. You see, in my opinion, only children that haven't yet grown and gained some wisdom dislike Ron. For you to have him become one of Voldemort's followers and kill two aurors and intend to kill Harry just shows you have no idea who Ron really is.

I hate Ron bashing. Bye

The relationship between Harry and Hannah is so totally unbelievable it's laughable, lol! Canon Harry would have probably rebelled against it, especially during this particular year as this was his most angst ridden year.

... Really ? That's it ? Well that's disappointing. Harry learnt he will be forced to marry a girl who had trashtalk him for half his time at Hogwarts and with just a simple "I'm sorry" everything is immediately alright ? it's never going to be aknowledge again ? Geez that's convenient !
I have an idea for next chapter why don't you have Voldemort coming to Hogwarts and say "Well Harry I know I killed your parents and try to murder you multiple times but you know I'm very sorry. I think we start on the wrong foot how about we start anew from now on and try to be friends ? I will even give you a cool tatoo ! "
I mean from where we are now, why the hell not ?

You really want us to believe that Mr. Abbott forgot he created a marriage contract between his own daughter and the famous boy who lived ?
Yeah right...

I completely disagree with Susan (who frankly seems to be a bitch in this story to be honest), what she and Hannah did during 4th year may have been different from Ron's betrayal, that doesn't change the fact that they weren't much better than him by turning viciously against Harry like they did. And since Gryffindors apparently doesn't know about true loyalty, I will continue by saying that I'm not surprise that a Puff' is too much of a coward to face the responsability of her actions, after all Puff' don't know what true bravery is, right ?

Okay, someone should really think about that you owe between Ron and Harry Ron has never shown a lot of skill or knowledge in Magic even though he has appeared. I'm wondering if somebody was controlling him during the duel to make him that way even if he had a problem with Harry some of those does he made no sense just my observation and opinion.