No! Why did Paul have to die! that's so sad!

Yay! SEQUEL!

Trying to impress a certain Pokemon, Luxray? ;)
I've read almost all your Pokemon stories, btw. I LOVE YOUR WORKS! Keep writing and keep up the good work :)

I ,for one, first of all, would just like to say that when I originally read this chapter afterwards I was depressed so I didn't review but now that that's over with I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU! ...anyway. I am EXTREMELY mad at you ... and that's still the UNDERSTATEMENT of the MILLENNIUM (1000 years). :

My heart broke during both the first and second of these fanfictions. Why must you end on a cliff-hanger? These two fanfictions are absolutely fabulous and I can't wait for the next one! Keep on writing!

Best wishes and God bless,

writindownsouth

I hope you make a sequel!

ahh great ending, i love it when the main character dies :3
but... a sequel without shinji-sama, what madness is this D

-he's alive x,x-

YOU KILLED HIM? I HATE YOU! Jk, but stillllllll... HOW COULD YOU? D': *cries*

This was brilliant, even though- gah.. TT I was cringing through that whole part where he was being killed.

I don't really get what Makkurana did to break that bond or whatever between Paul and Dawn though ; Still, horrifyingly amazing. :P *shot*

I wonder how Owari is gonna be, apart from awesome that is XD

Another amazing story in this series! I can't wait for the third one :) x

P-Paul? Nooooo!
Oh Dawn... Memory loss is probably the best way she could deal with it. The other option would most likely be insanity, right?
... I'm just gonna guess that either Akiko, Isamu. and Paul are somehow alive or will come back to life. Well, Paul at least. He is one of the two main characters after all!
Looking foreward to Owari!

Nooooo

I was going to send an angry message to you for not updating but now with how the last chapter turned out I wish you didn't update.

How is the last arc suppose to ikarashipping if Paul is dead and Dawn lost her memory?

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO!
You bitch! What have you done!? NOOOOOOOO!

Paulie and Dawnie D;

My life Over.

You better fix this mess.

xx
Dani
(P.S I apologie for calling you a bitch! Brilliant ending... in a depressing way. It made me cry... D; I can't wait until the next one!)

datt was so sad! y did u kill Paul .

even though it was a sad ending -.- I still love ur stories :D

NO NO NO NO PAUL CANT DIE! *crying* this is so sad! I cant wait for the sequal...*burst out crying*

...anyway!

What will happen to Dawn now...