John sometimes seems to be the only things keeping Sherlock sane. That's a lot of pressure for a kid.

That was adorable, sad, sweet, endearing, heart rending, and somehow just perfect. Hope you return to this someday.

Awww, this is really lovely - a pleasure to read :)

I love it, but I would love love it even more if there were more chapters! XD

Hey! I've finally read the first chapter of your story and I love it! I love how you've included all the characters from the series and how similar they are to their adult counterparts. )

I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter but I felt that I needed to review this chapter first. )

Rhian

This touchy-feely stuff between John and Sherlock makes me super uncomfortable.

Another well-written chapter, your writing is lovely. However, I would look over the first paragraph again, there were noticable spelling and punctuation the story, actually, there were spelling errors.

A suggestion for a chapter would be, because of the tension in the Watson family, there is a huge fight between the parents and John while Sherlock is around.

This chapter was cute and funny.

There was one spelling error, where I think you meant to put 'bribe' put typed 'bride'.

Also, there were some areas where I would have added a hyphen (to connect adjectives. For example, she read this review in an oh-no-she-didn't kind of way).

You capture Sherlock's character quite well, as I have said before. However, I think John's character is a bit more difficult to capture and I think it requires more work. John Watson is more of a vague character than Sherlock even in the original short stories, as he is writing about Sherlock and not himself.

I think it's a nice touch when you show/date your corrections, it shows that you care.

Now, in the chapter, you mention Harry with her boyfriends. In the show, she is a lesbian (or perhaps bisexual, I'm not certain), so an idea might be John reeling when he finds out and goes to the 'older' Sherlock for advice.

Something I forgot last chapter-you said that Sherlock was going into the second grade. I do not know how the education system works in London, but I do not believe that they have a 'second grade'. However, I could be wrong.

Good chapter. Some punctuation errors (forgotten period/commas, etc.) but hardly noticible.

Another strong chapter. One thing I would say is that after Sherlock ousted John for theiving, I don't think he would be apt to giggle or anything of that matter. I think he would be a little angry that Sherlock knew.

Very interesting start. You capture Sherlock's character quite well.

Well, glad your finally back! Almost forgot about this story. I hope you update soon, I want to see where you're going with this.

Aww. This is so cute. Especially the last little section.
The whole story is really good. Really well written.
Keep it up!
Gx

No. Stop that you're making me cry! TT TT Sherlocks dad and the plane and god I can just imagine... Then the little things that he didn't miss like the cookies and stuff and OH MY GOD IM BAWLING NOW! :U

Anyways, random emotional breakdowns aside, this story is super cute (except for that part that made me cry of course :T) and I would give you an idea so you could update faster/more if my brain weren't so fried... Im really hoping someone else is more helpful than me, though ;3;

My, I find this far too cute to pass up on! Thank goodness I found it only this far in. I can imagine it's going to be very interesting as they grow older. I can't wait to see what you have in mind.