F**CK YOU! FREAKING AGAIN, IT SAYS IT'S COMPLETED AND IT'S NOT! DON'T DO THAT!

I'm sad you dropped this
I think in fics characters can be however the author wants so I don't really understand this kind of review. If someone doesn't like your fic they should stop reading it.
I wrote only a few fics in my life but I did because of an idea I had. I was happy that people liked it but I wrote it according to my head, my idea.

Oh man just when I was getting over Chloe and Ollie not being together. lol
Well hope to read more from you in the future.
Happy writing.

Ok I'm getting over it a little. lol

You're breaking my heart here. lol

I know I try to have an open mind when Chlollie aren't together, but ti's hard. lol

Sorry I can't like Will because I love Ollie and he's the only one for Chloe. lol

I'm still hoping for a Chlollie reunion!

YES!

The angst I know I have to be strong to endure for now. lol

Hello again. Just reiterating a comment, you have some good ideas its just that they are a bit tricky to pull off well when most of your audience wants a happy ever after. But it can be done (eg what you don't remember by Skubble its a Chlex)

My fav bit in this was Lois (you wrote her really well and in character I thought). Again hope you continue to write even if you don't post, because you Do have the ability to write in such a way that moves the reader emotionally (eg Chloe dying in Promises)

will you finish this?:(

Just a suggestion, you might want to include a warning on your first chapter that this is really a story about Chloe/ OC and Chloe/Oliver friendship. It might stop people from getting the wrong idea about what you're trying to write about, although part of the problem might be that you didn't know how the story was going to go when you started it as demonstrated by your author's note in Chapter 6 when your reviewers started asking if this was going to be a Chlollie.

Sorry you've lost this reader...

Not Chlollie, Chloe is pregnant from another. It was necessary to say that it was not a Chlollie fic. I'll stop now. Sorry.

Lois rocked in the first chapter and Oliver/Chloe were a mess..which was a great start for a story showing how they resolve all these issues between them. Instead you bring in Will and Oliver is very very out of character in this story and Chloe is nothing more than a shell either scared or crying.

As I said the start was promising, and a story where the two mains are in conflict can be a good read - but being honest, enjoyable is not a word I would use to describe the story.