Well, I’m a little late to the party, but I’m still reading this! Your dialogue especially makes this a fic to keep track of, mainly because of all the clever comebacks, and the way you give a lot of characters something interesting to say or do, in ways that speak of extra *personality*. Plus, the humor here is quite snappy too. Quick and witty, and usually in the form of snarky verbal remarks. It’s also a great deal of fun to see all of these different characters. I’m impressed by how you manage such a large group, while still keeping them very distinct from on another.

Also, congratulations on your books! That sounds like a real accomplishment, and even though I’d always like to read more of this, I’m even happier that you’ve been able to pit some original content into the world. Be proud!

Hi, i really love your stories when r u gonna update this

I loved this chapter! Crane is my favorite character. Please update again I’m very interested in what happens!

Worth the waiiitttt

I may have done a small happy dance when I saw this had updated. :D
Nice chapter, though I def need to go and re-read from the start to remind me what's happened (in a more detailed way then IT'S ALL GOING WRONG FOR THE ROGUES, ARRRRRGH!) ;)

Life happens. I'd be interested in the novels, though.

Pls update... If you can that is.

I do love re-reading your stories and I completely forgot that I hadn't review this chapter, so sorry about that.
This was a great chapter that raised so many questions! Everyone is getting so tied up in the plot, even characters that I didn't expect to see!
I'm looking forward to Crane rescuing Catwoman, however that may be!
Also, with the mention of the Joker, I do wonder if Harley will make an appearance?
I think Crane quoting Jervis at the end of the chapter really does say it all. Everything is making me so curious and I can't wait to see where the plot takes us!
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Once again, a funny, engaging, and in-character chapter. The actions and motivations suited the characters enough, the plot is maintaining suspense, and the dialogue was funny enough for a few laughs (which is more than some fics can say). The only thing I can really say against both the chapter and story, is that the word "child" in Crane's speech, seems a bit overused;not just here, but also in previous chapters. Although, if I think about it, it might not be so much a matter of over use, so much as a matter of lacking in proper atmosphere and/or delivery for it to not sound silly or forced. Granted, that's just my own opinion, but either way, this is overall a pretty good story, and I only wish I had made myself review sooner.

Keep up the good work.

I liked the plot advancements. I'd like to see the other factions and a little Eddie soon. The action was a little confusing with Anarky and Red Hood just getting introduced.

I love Crane's reaction to the possibility of hugging a child. What a drama llama.

Hey, sometimes after twenty-one chapters, I get confused if a character hasn't spoken up in a while.

GOTHAM CITY SIRENS?

I can't wait for you to finish it!

Thank you for updating! I love that you finally mentioned Joker. I would like more Crane he is pretty awesome and I love the way you write him. He's my favorite. And as always please update soon.