nine and donna are an amazing pair that i adore. they would have been so happy with each other :')

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That was good.

Fuck no fuck no fuck no fuck no FUCK NO. The goddamn motherfucking Angels. Why of all things, Angels?
Besides that, I love this. Donna and Nine are just perfect. And the whole Nine after the war... amazing.

"Flirt on your own time, Earth Girl,"

HAH! I can definitely see 9 saying that. Oh, why couldn't we have had 9 with Donna, it would have been so brilliant.

Aww, great ending. And I like the idea that Time Lords would have automatic programs to erase paradoxical memories, that makes a lot of sense.

Fantastic story. I enjoyed that a lot. And Donna and 9 were just wonderful together. Both a bit tender and protective, both as sarcastic as old boots.

Loved it.

I'm favoriting this one.

"Well then..." he said, taking her hand. "Fantastic!"

Aww, I went all gooey. It would have been fantastic to see Donna and 9 together. You are writing them wonderfully. They are so completely them that I can just see it all in my head, like a real episode.

"Still, guess a shot of adrenaline is all I needed. Does wonders for the ole' wiring." He tapped his temple with a grin,"

Hah! Adrenaline or tea. Yeah, 9 would go for the adrenaline. And cheeky again mentioning the marathon runner thing, since that's CE's thing.

Very cool.

"The scene before her looked almost biblical, a ring of light encasing a small portion of Paris not too far off from where they were. Outside that ring of unnatural daylight caused by the crack was night, and the city glittered around them."

WONDERFUL description, I could really see that. That would have looked magnificent in CGI.

"Just a little thing...about fifty years old."

Aww, and LOL at the same time. I bet he was a cute kid, 50 years old. ROFL.

"They can hide out, asleep, hibernating on a planet for years and years, waiting for something to wake them up."

This, makes a lot of sense of a lot of episodes that didn't make sense until now. Thank you.

"Is there always this much running?"

I LOLed!

"That's bad..."
"How so?" He opened the door again, staring at her intently."

I'm not entirely sure I'd want to have the Doctor say, "that's bad" then stare at me intently. That's a very unsettling idea. And considering 9 could stare a hole through a star destroyer, I'd probably be peeing myself.

"Everything was so vibrant, so colorful, so saturated that it was as if she'd been seeing in shades of gray for her whole life and was just now seeing color for the first time. "

That's brilliant! (Excuse the pun.) It never really occurred to me that the Doctor might see differently, but it makes complete sense, and is very cool. That he sees colors more vibrantly than we do really makes sense.

OOH! You sneak! Weeping Angels. And Donna up against Weeping Angels. I am so enjoying this story!

"If he heard her, he chose to ignore her question,"

Ooh, this is going to be good, the brusque, sarcastic Doctor and the brusque sarcastic Donna. I can't wait!

"Fine! I'll stay here!" Snail Snarl. "DOCTOR!" LOL! I can so see that.

"he hopped up on the counter top."

I sort of miss 9's athleticism. Good bit of characterization, I could completely see him doing that.

Yeah, I like that ending. Donna may be sarcastic and a loud mouth but she's not going to leave a friend out in the cold. He needs looking after, she'll look after him. Even if he is a git. :D

I'm really enjoying this story. 9 and Donna together, magic.

"before a single word could come out of his mouth, she spat, "Still thinkin'!"

LOL! I can so easily see Donna snarling that.

Great cliffhanger ending, mutant snails.

Great chapter, everything was perfectly in character. I've missed Donna. I'm loving this.

Nice! Oh, that should be canon somehow!

Man, wouldn't it be great if we could hire Chris and Catherine and film that?

:-D

Ah! That's who the old man was, the man who stopped her!

Oh no, darkness with Weeping Angels near! Must read next chapter!

Yikes! Crack in the sky, and now Weeping Angels! It just keeps getting worse, which for story-telling purposes, of course, is it getting better.

On to the next chapter!

Yay! Donna... TARDIS... giant (presumably alien) snails with teeth...

Let the adventure begin!

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! PANIC!