Liked this

awesome!~

Amazing work. Absolutely loved it!

This was good, any chance of ever writing a follow up fic?

Aaaaaaaaw. This is one of the sweeter revelation fics I've read. I love it!

It is true that they always seem to build them but never use them. That is at least partially due to active efforts to keep them from using some of the more dangerous inventions. But there is a limit to what can be done there. Thank you for posting!

This is really good! Revelation fics are my favorite, and I think you wrote this one very well. It definatly deserves more game than it currently has. Amazing work!

I would have probably waited until they were about to run out of air...

Hello, just want to say that I really enjoyed this. :) 'twas short and sweet and the situation seems realistic and true to the characters. I find that some revelation fics can get a bit cheesy, but this wasn't so, in my opinion. Thanks for making my day :)

I like the metafore you pressed on to the physical situation

This is actually the fic that got me into Danny Phantom. I just found it again and decided that I should leave a review. I really like the emotion in here. The ending makes me really want to know what happened afterwards.

This was good! I like it!

This just begs for a sequel!

Love this story. I keep coming back to read it again and again!

Interesting. It's very simple and straightforward; the pacing and dialogue don't have as much finesse as in your later works. I would have liked to see it get a little more complex, be a little more interactive and difficult...getting more in the moment instead of summarizing all of the "we can't get out" bit. There was nothing surprising about this story. It's exactly the confession and response you anticipate. Somehow I wanted more. But all in all, it's not badly told.

-Hj