I love how you wrote the Trunks-Vegeta-Bra relationship dynamic. I hate the notion that Vegeta outright treats Bra better and so I was really happy with your explanation at the end Great job!

Glad I came across this gem! The father and son relationship here is well written and true to character, the speech Vegeta gave to his son was phenomenal I can’t get enough of this two, I wish you are still in this fandom!

Awwwwwwww

I wonder what made Trunks cried like this! But it's so sweet that Vegeta cares though, and I literally loled when he was thankful that none of his enemies had ever cried at him or he would have been dead lol

Loved how you wrote their personalities. Thank you for the great stories!

LOVE. I seriously love all of this. So clever and well written. Great job. :)

I really liked the reason why Vegeta treats Bra differently. Makes sense

Oh my goodness I just loved this. I have spent more time stalking around Vegeta family fics than I will ever admit and you are the first person to make a sweet story AND stay so completely in character. Kudos, you need to get paid for this ;)

xD This was hilarious and adorable and the same time :D

Awww fucking awww

This is SOOO WELL WRITTEN! You keep everyone in character, even Trunks (who people mess up more often than they think).

Haha. I loved the ending. Especially with Trunks' question about what if Bra wants to train and if he was still grounded. Overall, this story was amusing although a bit confusing in parts. But very enjoyable. Nicely done.
-D101

Nice ending line! I think it sums up things in that chapter really well. It also amuses me that Trunks was upset and a bit ashamed that Goten was stronger than him... is this why he was crying? That's rather weird.
-d101

Again confused by the two paragraph chapter but I think I'm getting the hang of this. The only thing I recommend is making it more obvious these chapters are in the present.
-d101

This chapter was a bit confusing. I can understand conversations that never happened but the bit at the end seemed more like a story that never happened. It's just a bit confusing coming from story format to this. That's all.
-d101