I like it please update

Whats with the might be to corny? like no fluf at all, was fine! cant wait for more! I relly wanna knwo what this man wants now!

Come on its been like what a month since you updated,the story is good and original unlike other stories update it!

Wow this sounds like it's going to be an amazing story. I can't wait to read more.

Oh my god this is soo good! I really can't wait to read more so please update soon!

Hi you must update ! Anything that involves the Celestial Spirits is of interest to me! (:

I really like the beginning of your story!
And I like your writing too! At fisrt it doesn't seem to make much sense but as you keep on reading it really does!
Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward for the next chapter!

so good that man was creepy

XD I LUV IT! Update please!

oooooh! this is great! I love Lolu fics. Loke is jut so cute! please update soon, i wanna know what happen next!

Loved this! I just started to watch this anime, I am currently on episode 49! So far, I think you've nailed these characters, especially Lucy. I'm going back and forth between Loke and Natsu, but right now I think Loke is just so darn adorable! Keep updating please! :D

hi

wow

Lucy should just get over it

by the way nice story

Nice story :)

Oh my gosh! I'm so excited, I can't wait to figure out what happens next. Will the man show up again? Eek! I really love this. Also, the way you made me think of Cana and Loke was really interesting.

~Kratos

LOVE THIS