Love it :)

This is probably the best Thomas fic I've ever read! So congrats, Thomas has always been one of my fav characters on the show, I always thought he was misunderstood. I'm glad that someones finally delving deeper into what made him the way he is. Please continue with this story, I really wanna know what happens next :)

Excellent view of Thomas and his thoughts. Ghastly what the soldiers, doctors, and nurses went through. But worst of all is that Thomas Barrow knows very well when he mucked the whole thing up.

mendacem memorem esse oportet

I kept hoping that Thomas would meet his match

sadly, it's not happened yet

and O'Brien too...

Oooh! Very nice! Excellent characterisation, and an intriguing wee bit of plot... I rather wish there was more of this to come. :-) Your Thomas is awesome.