Very well written, though I would like to see more... Mystery, and action, truthfully.

Grammatical error a few chapters back, you put 'asses' instead of 'assess'. Slightly different meaning.

this is really good can't wait for more

And she breaks down. :D

Molly's so sweet, she can't bear to see people suffering

Poor John, Poor Sherlock, poor Everyone! Reichenbach was quiet tramatic! I love this story! Sorry, I haven't gotten around to reviewing, I've been flipping through these chapters so quickly! :D