okay that was so dramatic

Is Ealdor safe?

A well written adventure.

Wh-what but Leon can't die it's IMPOSSIBLE I mean the only time he does die he's conveniently saved by druids

Really good story! Loved the adventure and the love story, as well as the friendship angle with Gwaine. Not so sure about the very end though (just the last paragraph or two) just seemed a bit rushed to me. Overall though you really did a super fantastic job!

Jess

Ok so first, this was a very interesting and amusing fanfiction. Second, I wasssss going to rant about the fact that you totally cock-blocked the lemon to my lemon seeking eyes...butttttt then I remembered that this is a rated T fanfiction...sooooooo all in all you did great...i just really would have like to have read a lemon...

This was wonderful. I loved every word of it.

This was lovely and I really enjoyed reading it.

I was really interested in reading this story, however I am now simply disappointed in it.

Merlin is the MOST POWERFUL WARLOCK TO EVER LIVE! Why are you making him a weak and having him do nothing to save Arthur?

sequel please.

i like it a lot! it sucked me in no matter how hard i tried to stop reading...so ...i only got two hours of sleep today lol i had to wake up at four but i couldn't bring myself to stop till it was like 2 am.
yep... im so tired but i had to finish it before getting back to work lmao

good job. I wish they could have cuddled together at the end though!
you should make a sequel! Arthur still seems iffy about the magic thing so you have something to start with right there, and! he hasn't heard of how many times he's been saved by Merlin or that it wasn't a choice to be magical for him since he was born with it. and The two evil ...girls.. ..the m&ms! .lol(stopped myself from saying something else) don't know the book is destroyed!

see, a sequel is calling you! haha anyway keep up writing awesome things! please and thank you!

Holy Crap! You killed Leon!
Bastard.

*cuddles Leon plushy*

excellent! best fanfic i read yet grammer great, way you wrote the characters fab, the way arthur says his servants an idiot full marks :) x can't wait for more

YOU BLOODY KILLED LEON MCCANTBEKILLED?
I hate you.
*cuddles Leon plushy*
He's my favorite.