NO DONT PLEASE ADD MORE I LOVE THIS STORY

Continue!

Nice start. Please continue.

No way can u just leave it there please I want more! I love it!

Don't know if you've already made a decision seeing as this was written months ago, but another chapter would be great. :)

Good job; I like Merric.

I knew Murtagh couldn't stay away for long! His appearance was priceless, in a 'knight-in-shining-armour' kind of way. It was very original and I'm glad you added more description. Imagery is everything for the reader's imagination!
I would like there to be an epilogue, to explain things from Murtagh's point of view. I just can't stand the fact that there was only one chapter for him! He's my favourite character! Maybe even build it up enough to have a proposal at the end? That would be awesome, and I'm sure I wouldn't be the only one to commend you for it. Please write another chapter! There must be more fluff!
Brilliant work for this chapter, though. I really enjoyed it!

I like the comic relief of the guard. He gave me a bit of a laugh! Oh, Murtagh is so vague, yet so precise. I like that you included a reminder of their conversations back at the jail, something that only Nasuada would know.
As for the previous chapters, I understand that Nasuada would need an heir and all that, but these men do NOT know how to win a lady's favour! Great story so far, can't wait to see her reaction to Murtagh!

You should continue! I just barely started reading it, and I already love it!:):):):):) If you think you could continue it, you should! I will definetly(sp?) Read it!:):):):):) I would like to see more of Medea, and maybe pair with the young gaurd, I can't remember his name , sorry...? Just an idea you don't have to. Sorry if i offended you with thatl and the name thing...x.X x/ But anyway, I love it and keep up the great work!:):):) I look forward to it if you decide to continue it!:):):):)
*ObsessiveDreamer:D

I believe my following of the story rather than favoriting it speaks for if I want it to continue or not. In other words, carry on.

You do what you want with this story. If you continue it I'll read it. Simple as that.

Now...

Murtagh said it! :D Thank you for this enjoyable chapter.

Good luck with your writer's muse!

AT LAST!HE SAID IT ONCE AND FOR REAL!sorry for my ridiculous reviews but anyway...if you have new ideas write more:))

Hey!He asked her to come after all...wt*f..

"You already know" or "You know why"...or "I want to tell 'I love you, but I can't'" same old Murty

"produce" an heir?

I am so glad you didn't really have Murtagh leave... I am still wondering why he did that... Still the chappy ended well, and though I hope you continue this, if it is indeed the end, I will not complain as it beats the pants off CP's dismal ending.

Your characters are likeable. I will miss them if this is the end.