Reviews for I Will Get You Back Di Angelo |
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stuffofepicnes chapter 9 . 4/10/2015 Since when does Nico have friends |
Randomer11 chapter 3 . 1/24/2015 Ha ha Poor Thalia everyone knows she can't drive |
Randomer11 chapter 2 . 1/24/2015 Diiieeeeeeeeeeee Amanda! Thalia and Nico belong together! |
Randomer11 chapter 1 . 1/24/2015 Poor Nico Poor Thalia |
SoulHorse chapter 20 . 10/18/2014 Lovin it! |
Baily chapter 8 . 2/28/2014 Uhh I don't know I wanna say Jason or Leo but I have a feeling no |
TheSadisticDaughterOfHades chapter 18 . 2/6/2014 Ok honestly I love most stories and yours Is ok I guess but like many others have said, this story has way too much songs which consumes too much of the actual storyline. Or if you want to balance it out, you can write a lot and add some songs once in a while. Usually in my fanfics I just add songs because either it fits the scenario too well or I'm just lazy to write more. Another thing is that during Thalia's death, I think that you could have been more in depth with it and go deeper into Nico's sadness and how much Thalia means to him instead oh just writing "he realized he really loves her." It would be nice to see the impact her death had caused him before he went to bring her back. Now that Brad storyline was actually really interesting and if you made Nico stay and show us his jealousy towards how Thalia acts with Brad and how she thinks he was the one that saved her not Nico would have caused up a lot of drama and stuff. This is just my opinion though I found that anonymous reviewer and he/she was absolutely not justified to call you a dumb bitch because after all, it takes one to know one right? They sholdnt have did that because it know it must hurt a lot but you handled it extremely well! So yeah. You still need a lot of improvements but it's alright, baby steps. |
Epicator chapter 20 . 10/18/2013 who ever offended u is a total flipping bi *&! how could he/she do that! this story is amazing and i just dont know what was wrong with hime! |
Anonymous chapter 20 . 10/13/2013 Hi Sorry I can't say my name GO TO HELL WHOEVER WROTE THAT REVIEW! This story is amazing From anonymous |
guest chapter 7 . 7/31/2013 Pretty good story!but do they have to have a song every single freaking chapter?! |
drea dark chapter 20 . 3/9/2013 you totally owned these people. So cool. and this was epic |
drea dark chapter 19 . 3/9/2013 cool |
drea dark chapter 18 . 3/9/2013 i'll read |
drea dark chapter 16 . 3/9/2013 Name: drea dark hair coloor: midnight blue Eye color: brown Demigod: yes Godly parent: hades (not clamed yet) Personality: she is shy, sweet, smart, athletic, and is highly violent (when needed) Family: mother and step- sister |
drea dark chapter 13 . 3/9/2013 revenge so sweet justlike table candy |