This was a beautiful and amazingly well written story; I loved every single part of it and I cannot wait to read the sequel. I'm hoping it'll be as wonderfully heartwarming and adorable as this one was

you forgot to say we isted of i in your ROYAL! CANTERLOT! VOICE!

its gotta be 12 in the morning and im still reading this lol! :p

I think that you need to go back and review your grammar. Not trying to be mean but...

BROHOOF TO YOU YOUR STORIES ARE AWESOME /]*[\
Omg royal canterlot voice is fun your right. You are an amazing
Writer and you should keep writing stories
*POSSY PIE AWAY!* hehehe

I love this pairing... I may write about it myself at one point. I really don't like pairing the... well, everypony else calls them 'cannon characters'... I don't like pairing those 'cause they may get in the way of other ponies' views, and I don't mean to start fights over stuff. But yeah, I'll do that.

I'll say! Well, first of all, there are a few instances throughout the story where your grammar and spelling is less than perfect, but most people don't care about that, so whatever. Plotline is good, in this chapter especially. When I find something big to critique I'll write it. Til then, keep going! It's awesome so far!

Cutes pinkie pie story ever! Plez wright more!

To cute!

I freaking LOVED Laughter lost! I just wish you would have written more afterwords! Very amaze, such story, WOW!;) Ps. I'M THE PINK PONY IN DIS STORY!OuO

Might be way to late to say but Applejacks accent is totally overdone in this chapter, other than that the story so far is amazing

I like this I can't stop reading it.

Loves it

I ALSO REMEMBER FLUTTERSHY TROLLING HIM LIKE A BOSS! THE ROYAL CANTORLOT VOICE IS VERY FIN INDEED! THIS IS VERY FUN! PEGA-HOOF! /]*[\

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