Thanks Doc! This was an excellent story - I really enjoyed it!

This was awesome. I love this alt timeline. I am so happy right now. Lol.

Great story. Well done!

I love it.

:)

Haha! Little idiots probably wouldn't know it was Chuck if it smacked him upside the ass.

One of my favorite 'Chuck goes on the run 'stories. I've read this story three or four times. Therefore it is high time to heap praise on your efforts. Cheers, mate.

Another great story! I would have like to seen Beckman being asked to retire for mishandling the project. Hope you can find insipration to write some more stories!

Your summary sounded promising but when I started to read your story, the language didn't match that of the show. I'm not a prude, a swear word appropriately thrown in when for example, a character is shot and in pain might work, but you have swearing in your story just for the sake of swearing. Chuck was a great show because you can watch it with your family. The writers didn't need to have the characters F this and F that because they were talented. I think you might have talent but I won't be able to find out because you ruined your story within a whopping couple of paragraphs by throwing the F bomb around willy nilly; you couldn't even write one page without it. The writers of Chuck had class, that's why most people liked it. You would do well to remember that in your writing because I think this would have been an enjoyable story if I wasn't immediately inundated with out of place F bombs.

HOLY SHIT WHAT A FUCKING STORY! Clever, creative, at times sad and others lovely, and a little confusing to follow at times (likely to be remedied when I read this again). But wowie zowie.
Chapter 5 blew me away with the fake-out. Once Casey "killed" Chuck, I thought 'holy shit all bets are off with this fucking story'. Mad mad MAD props to you and this story son.

Chuck and Sarah have earned their happy ending. Nice work. Thank you.

Good fic with a happy ending. As heartbreaking as it would have been, I actually think the sad ending would have made for a better story.

Started off slowly because of the background you had to cover where he learned the necessary skills, but it's picked up very well. Really enjoyable so far, and I had to leave this review because of your closing line on this chapter. Awesome.

I enjoyed this one from the first to the last line. Would love to see short stories of what chuck was doing while on the run. The people he met, what he did to keep the act going. I really enjoyed reading this.

Great chapter...

Awesome chapter. I always wished they would have done something like this. Showing how intelligent Chuck was...