I really do hope you plan to continue this story, though it seems like so much time has passed since you last updated. I never got to read the original, so I’m very sad that I’m left wondering after these remaining two chapters. The two chapters available are perfection, so I really do hope that someday you come back to this, even in a slightly re-edited form!

Pls update the chapter

I'm sickened. You're a disgusting, sickening person.

can u please upload the original!

Update please!

I know that you are probably going to never update this story again, however I wished to say that the first 2 chapters were very interesting and I really wish you would, or at least get the old version back up because I'm very interested and qurious to see what it was about.

I hope you can finish editing I really enjoyed the first two chapters!

I cant find any chapter

hi i dont know if you're still alive since the last update wad in 2016 but if you are still here just know that i really enjoyed these 2 chapter and im desperate for more. so.i really hope you still update this. if not, I'll understand but I'll be highly disappointed.

This edit is great when compared to the original draft, which I read up to chapter four in google translate. I’m a writer who completed a second draft novel for my senior thesis as a creative writing major in college, so I appreciate the time and effort revision, rewriting and editing takes. I hope you update soon with all the chapters up to chapter 19 since it has been so long. Best of luck.

If we didn't like the story we would have told you you know. We need and ending after so many chapters. The story is good enough for us to read and comment.

oh come on

Oh please put the rest of the story back up! Edited or not, doesn't matter! Your writing is gorgeous.

Please update your story. Very good work!

Great! Love this fanfic! Please continue!