Reviews for Mahou Sensei Ichigo? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, will there be more chapters, ever? Or is this story put on a shelf? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The main problem I had with the story is that despite the title, Ichigo doesn't really have much screen time. It would be fun to see Ichigo interact with his students but the only thing that has been shown is Negi and class 3A. If i wanted to see Negi interact with his students then i would read the manga instead. Even the change with Makie seeing Negi instead of Asuna isn't much of a change as the latter chapters are causing Asuna to quickly replace Makie. It should be Ichigo being the full center if the story or if Ichigo and Negi are the two maun characters then Ichigo would have much more screen time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to when you update this fic again |
![]() ![]() que siga este fict siii |
![]() ![]() ![]() when will we get to the good stuff |
![]() ![]() ![]() i know its the first chapter (those things ANYONE who writes ANYTHING look back on in shame) but i really cant see ichigo as unemployed. he was the deciding factor in two major wars and still hunts hollow, the shinigami would pay him, its not a voluntary position especially after all hes done |
![]() ![]() ![]() how will ichigo react to negi being a mage? |
![]() ![]() Your fanfic's biggest weakness is that Ichigo here feel like a small time side character with Momo which feel strange considering the fanfic's tile name and I admit kind of except Ichigo dealing with females classmates most of the time not in perverted situations(mostly) as considering this is a crossover with Negima. No offense meant but it feel like you are playing it a little too safe with canon, just an idea but what if you give a rival to Ichigo like Fate is to Negi? Like say Sextum Averrncus is awake somehow and working together with Fate so that way Negi can still face off against Fate during their first fight in Kyoko Arc even though Fate is holding back while Ichigo deal with Sextum. |
![]() ![]() Less negi more ichigo |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm, well that was a good chapter, and this is a pretty good story. keep it up man. by the way, I don't see a poll on your profile. |
![]() ![]() Beyond tedious actually, I quit reading dis shit. |
![]() ![]() The more I read on, the more I start to find 'this' tedious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story but it really lacks a lot of Ichigo almost every chapter, he's my favorite and I hope he gets more "screen" time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I've been reading the last few chapters and there's a lack of Ichigo in them only him getting mentioned every once and awhile so what gives |
![]() ![]() ![]() If she that badly wants out of that class, im sure the dean would allow her to switch if requested. Hasn't even crossed her mind lol. |