I see grammar is a skill you can’t learn now is it?

Fuck. You. And. Your. "Story".

Fuck. You.

Oh Gods, what is this shit ? Half the chapter is author responding to his sycophants ! Fuck. You.

This was surprisingly great, a bit disappointing to see it hasn't updated in so long. Amy was nice, and I'm also a little disappointed to see her not coming with Alex, though it is understandable she didn't. I just think the way they left was a little on the low not for me to properly appreciate.

That said, the story is written well. A few issues here and there but generally good. The story itself is a cut well above most on this site, which isn't really a compliment in and of itself since all that's needed to be better than that is to just have some basic writing knowledge, but this is good. It's in that group of the rare few actually good ones on this sites. Thank you for taking the time to write this, and while unlikely, I do hope there will one day be an update.

Another species with advanced enough tech... or just plain batshit loco enough to do something so crazy without the safety blanket of that tech

nice, I might get into playing Prototype did I spell it right? anyway update.

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Fuck yeah

After trolling through the Prototype crossover idea threads on SB, I finally got around to looking this fic up after getting 3/4 of the way through thread 3. WORTH IT. Mercer is DEFINITELY not as overpowered as I would've expected him to be against multiple regular-ish opponents, and I hadn't even considered the effects cryo ammo would've had. Great job, I hope to see more of this at some point!

Wraith Five

This is very very disturbing that the MC having allthose years did not end the Blackwatch. It was in his best interest and with his all abilities he had all that it takes to infiltrte all the bases that posses a shred of knowlegde about him and eliminate it. Systematic elimination of personel, cutting funds while taking a guise of high military or civilian figure would finally end the blackwatch. One more thing he is a vrius, he strives toward perfection against all odds, so I do not belive that after so many years he did not find a counter towards his weakness toward electricity, what is more he is a walking hulking ton of biomass, he could become the greates biotic being the galaxy has seen. Consume EEzo, integrate and he could simply reap the reapers to shreds.

Pretty much everyone is here for mercer so make it a wank feast

A krogan would get his ass whooped by Mercer. Any Krogan. Remember when he was whooping Thermobaric tanks and Supersoldiers? Krogans are easy.

please I beg that you continue this story, it's amazing, I really like fabrics with prototype involved but their rare and good ones like this are even harder to find, please keep writing, your an amazing author and please write more crossover's of prototype because I seriously like that game and story but not many share the feeling and I can see the heart, detail, and effort you put into making this story, your very creative, please keep up the good work and don't make me wait long because I' all get grumpy because of the huge cliffhanger you left, Amy is a great character, I'd hate to see her doe off, it's good that he's worried but like an occasional visit from afar to watch over her would be part of Alex's way of protecting just like he did with Dana, though I really hate how they made him a villain in prototype 2, I don't really like the swearing by second Heller but hey it's still a good game but I still prefer Alex, anyway, keep up the awesome work

¿Qué le paso a Dana?
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What happened to Dana?