Wow I love this story! :D Axel is a horse?! I've been looking for a AkuRoku horse story and I found one! :D sequel? ;)

This story is so sweet!

Now that was so damn sweet. And clever. I simply love these ideas and how you write them. I could just picture what Axel looke dlike as a horse and hot damn that would be a lovely looking horse. And Roxas was so enchanted. It's a little hearthurting to know that Axel will outlive Roxas but what matters is their current happiness. Bittersweet for me I guess. but I still love it of course.

Holy crap, that was amazing. You're great at writing such fantastical tales! And the happy ending... *melt*
It's a really good one! *thumbs up*

Horses are usually too dirty for my tastes, but I'll take on of /these/ special ponies! lol I can't blame Rox for falling under his spell.
I really enjoyed all of Axel's "charms", especially the mark of protection (Sounds like an awesome tattoo honestly, love celtic knot designs!) because it makes me think of all the exploits that could happen if other humans/magical things did find out! Supernatural fics just make me think "adventure" for some reason. Probably from too many "spirit hunter" shows. 8)
Also it was so neat how those girls were unknowingly swayed from the magic, I like the way you wrote them being unable to pinpoint what was different, but just accepting it anyways. *head scratch* If that's how it works, I'm probably enchanted right now...

I've actually heard the kelpie myth before, so I was excited to read your take on it. I love how you spun it into more of a reciprocated romance, you sort of sweetened the story without softening what the original monster does, Axel's still a manipulating man-devourer if you think about. I try not to. XD Same with him living so long as to go through many humans. It makes perfect sense, but can be a downer if I linger on it too long. Think I'll focus on what a cool grandma Coleen O'Donnel is instead! No matter how much she drinks, she can still ward off evil spirits /and/ well-meaning men who don't know which bowl goes into which cupboard! *heart*

Lastly I loved the Gaelic phrases mixed in, it makes everything so much more exotic and kinda reminds you that this is all foreign. (For me at least, I'm sure you've got some readers in Ireland) And THANK YOU for making things easy by having the translations right there at the top! I think it's such a pretty language, I actually tore through a list of Gaelic names for my new invert pet earlier in the year. "Rory the Roach" needed an Irish name since he was given to me on St. Patty's as a Chester replacement. D: Depending on what you're in to, that's either the best present ever or the worst... ANYWAYS, this was a wonderful story that fit the holiday perfectly. I feel like a good drink now rofl

Wonderful story, very sweet and sexy with a cute ending.

this story was cute but it made me sad thinking that after roxas dies axel will move on

Oh, man. I don't even know where to begin without sounding like the obsessive fangirl I thought I grew out of years ago. XD

I love this fanfiction, as well as pretty much any other fanfiction under your name. I don't even remember the first one I found, but over the months I started to realize, "Hey, all these amazing stories of my favorite gayboys are by the same chick...WHOA!" Now I pretty much stalk your profile for updates, creepy as that sounds, and I can easily say you're one of my absolute favorite authors on the site. :D

I'm horribly behind on updating my favorite stories list because I usually don't log in, just save the web pages and read them later...but when I get around to it, you'll be all up in it. I swear I'm addicted to your writing. There aren't any side effects caused by overexposure to awesome fanfiction, right? ...Right? D:

Okay, I think I'm done stroking your ego for now. That was fun. Veeeery fun, heh.

im really glad i had the time to finally read this, it's been a while since i've read an akuroku fic and this was really nice. i laughed when roxas' grandmother 'cursed' axel xD just glad it didnt do anything xD thank you! :D

OH MAI GAWD!

You and your stories make me squeal and grin like a fool while I'm reading.

Just, gawsh, I can't even praise this story enough. ANYWAYZ, d'you have a reference to the mark Roxas had on his hip? I think I may want to get another AkuRoku tattoo cos of this story :D

Oh my~! This story made my heart so happy. I totally did a little dance just now and I can't seem to remember how to not smile. So beautiful written and I loved how you imprinted the Gaelic in the story. I just, flowed and intertwined with the rest of the speech so naturally. OwO I think I might be enchanted myself, but as far as your stories goes, you know I already have been for such long time. -swooon-

Oh! And I could totally see before me how Roxas rode horsey-Axel over the hills. Wah~! I think I might draw that sometime in the future if I have the time. And then I'll just assume that "Axel's rug match the curtains". : p

Ahhh~ I'll be able to sleep comfy tonight~

Thank you for bringing such joy in to my life. (and to writtenly manifest Axel and Roxas so perfectly3)

Oh, oh, oh! This might as well be one of the best one shots I've ever read! The story was really original and just my type of thing, since I'm a sucker for mythology (and horses, haha) and romance. Really great!

It always makes me happy to see nicely done kelpie stories.

Well, I'm certainly glad Roxas didn't get eaten. /Laughs./

I really enjoyed this piece. After heaploads of angsty tragedy, I was in need of something sweet and passionate. It was well written and nicely thought out. I love how the ride was explained, it felt like I was the one riding Axel. xD

I'm baffled at this crappy review, but I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing. :)

... I seriously need to read other myths and tales of legends that aren't satanic/bounded to hell.

And I seriously need to review your new fics sooner.

This was really nice at the beginning (made me remember my days of horse-riding, that's for sure!) but eventually dulled out at the end. I wonder what would it be like if this fic were to be a multi-chap fic? No pressure!

Overall, it was really nice to read before bed, and thank you for the new knowledge we readers have gained~