I know it been years since u probably last looked at this story, but can u please continue on with this please please please please please please! please! please! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssseeeeeee!.
I know u probably already wrote message on ur other books Or reviews about not contiuing the story for reasons I don't know, but can u please update .
if it's the loss in inspiration, I suggest watching the film again.

will this be continued

Great Story! Really interesting :D
Keep going with it, you left everyone curious !

Two words: Amazingly Catchy :3
Keep going! :D
I am curious ! XD

This was really interesting, I liked it a lot :D I don't know any betas, sorry :( can't wait for more :)

So, there are quite a few grammatical errors you may want to work on, like "Where is him?" Which should really be "Where is he?" Simple mistakes that could easily be fixed though. Also I think I've said this before, but it's Isabelle, not Isabella. Also at times I feel Hugo is a bit out of character. I don't believe Hugo would ever curse really, but hopefully with a beta (make sure you find one who really understands the Hugo characters and enjoyed the film) these mistakes could be fixed. Interesting plot concept though. Good luck.:)

Ohhh it's getting good can not wait for the next amazing chapter

In support of some who are waiting for chapter 4, It's gonna be as empty as Death Valley.

For the historical content, I hope you're being accurate. Also I'd like to see a small reference to "Somewhere That's Green" showing Hugo's loneliness.

Oh gosh, cliffhanger! Gah, I'm curious now :D I loved this chapter, it was so interesting! can't wait for the next one! :D

Nice chapter! I love the cliffhanger... what are August's true intentions and why is Hugo in such a mess? I can't wait to find out.
There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes here and there, such as writing a past- tense verb instead of a present- tense verb and mixing up adjectives and nouns. Fixing it up a bit will help the story a lot!
Overall, I like it a lot. I hope you will introduce some of the characters from the original story back into this fic!

OMG I love it I can't wait till Friday!:)

Continue

Please,i am BEGGING you to CONTINUE! You're killin me!

Please please please please update:) im dying to know what happens and ive been checking for an update every day. You should chose a day to spend a lot of time on this story and write several chapters. Thank you for writing a good story thats not actually all about hugo and isabelle falling in love.

Awwwww...Poor Hugo! :( I wanna give him a HUGE HUG!