Loved it! As a NJ girl I can understand Danny's feelings about Hawaii. You did a nice job with this story.

A snowball fight in Hawaii - love it! What a great, heartwarming story!

Loved the Story ! Thank You, For Sharing It !

What a great story! You could feel the love the team has for one another! What an amazing father Danny is for Grace. Thanks for writing!

Very, very well done. And cute.

Wonderful little piece you've written here.

And this whole scene?

..."Hear that? This is me...

Priceless.

"He was grateful that as a detective he didn't need to wear their insignia; he wouldn't even if they gave him a raise. His days as a cop were born in New Jersey and when he too passed on he swore he would be buried in the soil of his homeland in the uniform he loved more than the badge on his hip."

Danny should be proud of being from New Jersey and for serving the Newark PD as well as he did and if HPD had any sense they'd know what an asset he is. Luckily, Five-0 knows and that's all that matters.

And I'm glad that Grace now realizes that she should always be proud of who she is but the casual racism of some of the native Hawaiians shocks me-I'm sure if they were called horrible and insulting names it would be a different story. And I have no doubt that happened earlier in the states'

history but it's now become reverse racism towards the mainlanders/haole and that is just as wrong.

Thanks for writing this :)

Enjoyed it.

This was a great story, thank you for sharing it! I'm glad the team came together to make Grace (and Danny) feel better. All that anger building up inside of Danny... a snowball fight was a perfect release! :)

A snowball fight in Hawaii and the Super SEAL being dunked in snow. That was priceless! Thank you for the lovely story!

This was neat. Finding snow in Hawaii. For a moment I was worried if Steve had really hurt himself, how would they get the chopper back?

This story was just awesome. You have an incredible talent for writing. I'd love to see more from you. :)

Great story all around! Loved your portrayal of the team as ohana.

This story is so sweet and well written - i just loved it! Especially the snow part that shows that everyone - though different - have their strong points!

Thanks for posting and sharing the story with us! I enjoyed it - especially all the team bonding; I'm a sucker for that!