This is an interesting story and well-written. I'm looking forward to reading more.

that was not dry! that was awesome! I loved it can't wait for more. I love "John smith" stories!

I love how you're doing this story. Keep up the good work :)

I like it so far, I enjoyed the scene in the cafe and hope you update soon.

cute please continue i'd like to see where this is going

nice. hope you update soon.

This seems like a great start to an interesting story. Can't wait to see what happens next.

-Goldenheart