Short but promising, creative and in character as always.
Your obisajj stories are very addictive so please...

I'm really hoping you will get back into a writing mood soon, I would love to see how this turns out!

This is really neat! I have a story somewhat similar to this that ive been working. I've just been waiting to develop it more before posting. Kudos on an interesting start and such believable characters! maybe we can trade notes. lol. Awesome start, cant wait to see more!

i would love redaing mroe of this. and am especially looking forward to ventress and obi-wan meeting later

Awwww Asajj, and Obi/Qui banter so cute! I'm a bit stuck because I haven't watched season 4 but I'm trying to get my hands on a copy!

Great job! This is a really intriguing start and I can't wait to see how Ky being Qui-Gon and having Ben with him will affect Asajj's future!

Very interesting!

Nicely done. :)

An interesting opening... certainly got my attention and I look forward to another excellent story from you :)