Hi!
I really enjoyed reading about the ghost John. He sounds like an incredible man and how he looks out for Sherlock and cares about him is just great. Although, I've got to admit, for first freaking out about Sherlock's love, he later doesn't really display any reluctance about kissing Sherlock. That might have to do with the black episode afterwards, from which he remembers nothing. I imagine he came to terms with and processed his feelings during that time as well as maybe had some experience with homosexual people through which he lost his tradition-induced initial reluctance against those feelings.
The ending, with nobody really able to remember the ghost after he's passed on is definitely a plot twist, but actually sounds quite logical. I was waiting for ghost-John to get a more stable body (or some other arrangement, so that he would be permanently with Sherlock, maybe due to their attached feelings) or maybe to give a comatose John III., whose soul had already left a soul again to occupy the body or for the two Johns to merge.
Really well written

HOLY FUCK. This, was such a mind fuck. Just-i dunno, wow. That last chapter? I was crying, relieved, sad, refretful, happy. I honestly dont know what i was feeling. Too much. You are INSANELY talented. I cant complement you enough.

Wonderful!

Beautiful.

I like that the Holmes family isn’t afraid of the unexplainable

First of all, how dare you. That hurt. That really hurt me. I'm not emotionally stable enough for this so soon after Avengers Infinity War.

Second of all, that whole story was beautiful, and unique, and I love it. It's also one of the few stories I can find where JohnLock is written really well and I actually like it (Not a shipper, sorry, I just can't see Sherlock being with anyone, not even John) but you did really well with this, it felt natural to read and didn't seem forced.

Oh. My god. I’m gonna cry. Thank you.

Ok well now that ive bawled for 20 minutes straight im gonna go drown my emotions in chololate milk and Benedict Cumberbach.

This is brilliant! The voice is great, it brings to mind the Watson narrative style in the ACD stories. You have really thought the world out so there is no confusion which is nice. The Watson Holmes relationship is tender and has depth. Many thank for a beautiful story!

When he passed on I cried so much, that I had to stop reading and wipe my face.
But this is the perfect ending.

This story...this story was marvelous. I love how they meet and get along and how everything progresses. I can empathize with how Sherlock felt with his father and than not wanting Watson to go. Part of me likes how he forgets until they will meet again so he does not have to feel the pain and how (I like to imagine Watson was with Sherlock, helping him during the Gap.) I think the ending is perfect for this story. It made me want cry by knowing they'll meet again makes it better. I would love to read that. You're a most wonderful writer and author. Cheers and ta. I know my Watson, my twin, will simply love this and that we will read this over and over again.

This is very emotional.
A very brilliant fic. :D
My heart fluttered just now. :)

that... was an amazing story. GREAT writing on that!
when Sherlock fell, i actually thought for a moment HE was going to become a ghost, but thank goodness he didn't.
i really was crying at the end. again great!

awesome idea for a story. the only part i didn't like was that sherlock forgot about his live with no sense, really, because you said the myths etc should come from somewhere, but if everybody forgets, nobody will remember to tell a myth
how will sherlock rationalize that he has the bullhead with headphones?

as a different solution i'd imagined that ghost-john takes over/merges with the new john.
anyway, cheers
yuura

It is beautiful. Thank you so much for this wonderful story.