I don't know if I'm the only person to have asked you this, but I wonder if you're ever going to transfer your works to AO3. I truly enjoyed this when I first read it and had a hard time accessing FFN for a while that I stopped reading it.

Later, I became active in AO3 and think you'll fit right in there. Stories like this are often very much appreciated on AO3 (the snide remarks, the witty comments, the angst, everything!), it's your domain.

Please, think about it.

In the meantime, I'll be reading this all over again.

brilliant. just wow.

This is so great!

A Sai POV! It was nice. I love how you described his drawings, it helped me create a mental image while reading.

I loved the ending to the story. I hope you do get inspired to add more to this. Thank you for sharing this to us, your audience!

It’s beautiful :)

This is the most childish, retarded, idiocy I have had the misfortune to see. There is no real interaction between characters, much less actual dialogue. All things spoken by characters seem to be childish catchphrases that make no sense in any way as conversation. I have no idea where the story goes, as you could take away all the Naruto characters and this chapter would make as much sense, so I will not waste my time. The description has apparently nothing to do with the story, and should be altered to describe the story instead of being an attempt at yet another catch phrase. This chapter has worse grammar than any I have read by ESL writers. How many accounts did you create to give yourself positive reviews? This is worthless insanity.

Yes. Yes. So much yes. All kinds of yes. This is hilarious.

this is perhaps one of my favorite naruto fic ever. there's so many beautiful things about this fic. i really loved how you wrote team 7 (all of them!) with such chaotic energy, and beautifully you fit all their jagged edges together into a found family. this story is just so wonderfully written, and i feel very privileged to have followed it all these years. thank you!

aaaahhhhhh I love this story so much.

I think their dynamics are hilarious and also beautiful. I loved getting Sai's perspective on everyone in the end. Sasuke gave Sai some of that brutal honesty and it was awesome. I love these guys. Thanks so much for sharing this story!

ow. my FEELINGS, I said

Oh my god, my feelings.

Sakura is amazing. Flawless. I love how proud she was of Sasuke having a rational thought. Multiple in a row, even. A great day for Team 7.

That moment at the end is so emotional. But before that I laughed because they're all just so dramatic. I love them.

yes, I love that Itachi showed up to have a big-brother talk with Sasuke. I love that they both got their digs in. Itachi's aesthetic was pretty lame but, also, Sasuke's one to talk. Sasuke was affected by Itachi and Saskura and Kushina and Naruto himself, and chose to help. Be something more than a vehicle for vengeance. Wonderful.

Oh no, this is so creepy. Poor Naruto.