My heart dropped in to my stomach when I read the last two lines. My eyes actually teared up - that doesn't often happen with me a literature. Kudos to you - you made me cry. But in a good way.

The oneshot itself was well-written and simple, which I liked a lot. Something with such simplicity made me cry like a six year old xD

Keep up the marvellous writing! :3

3 0 3 KAWAII!

I CRIED I CANT EVEN THIS IS BEAUTIFUL ASDFGHJKL

This is too beautiful.

The end confuses me, although that's just because I'm stupid orz
Anyway, I really laaaaff this story :')

This story was AMAZING!
Honesty that's all I can say, because I don't know how to wrap up how amazing it was with a bunch of words. There are no words.
I completely love this. Excuse me while I asdfghjkl.

aawwwww... it makes me want to cry... the happy kind, of course
thats jst brilliant

That first part describes John pain so well...

oh dear god, that ending!

Why would you do that? whyyy?

But really beautifully written.

Oooh, that was traumatic! Ugh, and I know I'm going to dream about it now, I should know better than start a new story after 4AM!

Lovely in it's traumatic way though, keep at it.

Ta

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. SO sad, though. Please write a reunion sequel?

Angst, especially great angst like this, always makes my heart hurt. You did a really awesome job with this, and the last line is making me emotional. I don't know why I torture myself like this! :'D