why are they so calm when a 30 years old became a toddler

Hi, how are you. I loved your story. It is I am very looking forward to continuatio

Hi, how are you. I'm enjoying your story and looking forward to reading. I hope he stays with Aaron and calls him father. Master.

I broke my arm once playing soccer and my mom made me stop playing because of that

my aunt got me nail polish a couple of weeks ago she got me Tea time which is like a red/copper looking color and navy intelligence that looks more black than navy and violet tendencies which is a very light purple

my cousin had to get his tonsils out his parents had work and couldn't be there for him so I took him and stayed with him the whole night it was a long night but I'm glad I could be there for him he was scared but my twin brother Levi and I stayed with him

I never faked being sick to get out of school I couldn't I been homeschooled my whole life but I did fake being sick to get out of going to the dentist cause I'm scared of them

I love Disney too but I would never go I'm terrified of planes and I have bad anxiety and I can't stand crowds

I'm not trying to be rude but, just for any future fics, two-year olds should be in diapers or pull-ups and a broken arm takes at least six weeks to heal.

This is a good story, but there are many, many errors, maybe get a beta reader?

In the show, Garcia almost never leaves Quantico, unless it's a mission that requires her to be there first hand to see to the tech stuff. Also, its extremely fast pase, every chapter of a book is supposed to be the equivalent of an episode, and your chapters are very short. Everything seems too serene too, so maybe give the characters back their dimensions? This is a good starting ground, but you need to build up more of a base before calling it a story. I hope you don't take offense to this, its meant to be a critique, not mean.

so cool!

really good!

amazing like the wizard of Oz!

this is amazing!

amazing job big brother!