please update

Update update plate update update please!

Oo
Next chapter onegai!

didn't they already know?

yes, as a matter of fact, haruhi is a girl! love the story!

Update soon

"Welcome!" greeted the Hosts - I think it's supposed to be 'the hosts greeted' (or that's what I was taught back in school)
- There are a few of those in there but ah, I suppose it get's annoying if I say it too many times ;)

Again, I enjoy the story and I hope that you will be able to post a chapter sometime soon, I'm not going to push though as I understand how hard it can be to write stories :)

Just take your time with it and make sure YOU are satisfied with what you write before posting it and, of course, if people aren't being a-holes about it, a little constuctive critism isn't a bad thing either :)
(a sad thing that some people forget the 'back-button')

Anyway, thanks for posting this wonderful story (and I'm sorry for any misspellings, my first language isn't English, but I try)

"but we call Honey-sempai" - a missing 'him' in there, though I'm sure it's just a typo :)

Arrigato - I believe it's arigato (though I'm not 100% sure)

And some minor errors n' stuff, but I enjoy the story (sometimes my eyes skip ahead of me and I get confused.. Donno if it's just me) xD

"As she went pasted a red-headed girl" - I'm sure you meant something like passed (as pasted means something else) ;)

"'He looks very feminine' thought Haruhi." - As far as I know it's Haruhi thought and not the other way around

And some small errors here and there :) But it all comes with practise and patience (and sometimes going over the chapters more than once to look for smaller or bigger mistakes)

I hope that you can use this at least a bit and I'm sorry if I don't spell something properly, my first language isn't English ;)

MORE!_

hmmm really good way to show it all out. I wonder what will you do different in this story to make it different from other ones. Please update it as soon as possible! I hope to read more of it sooner!
:)

I really do love this story!

love

Oooooh, I love this story do far! It's so interesting and glows with the anime perfectly. When will the host club find out that Kagome is a girl? I'm so excited!

Pwease update, I'm jumping in my seat waiting for the next chapter. Guahhhhh. \(_)/

This is your first story, right? It's actually really good! There weren't any spelling/grammar errors(at least I don't think so), and I love all the descriptions. It wasn't rushed either. I love it! Keep up the good work -3-